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pinklady
2009-11-30 . chapter 4
This is the most ridiculously horrible thing I've ever read. Really? Impervious?! Have you even read the books, do you even know what you're saying?

You just dump random bits of information and back story into paragraphs, you don't flesh out the characters or write a decent plot. It's not a bad Idea, people turning on Harry, Harry finding kittens, Harry wanting his own family, Harry running into his old school enemy, sparks flying. It makes sense and could actually be a good story but you've completely mangled it. If this were a first draft it wouldn't be so bad, you could revise and edit until you got to a good story, but posting this...as it is...is really a crime. Its awful. Sorry but its true. Keep trying but try editing and getting a beta reader before putting your stories out for unsuspecting readers to stumble upon. 1/5
Cazzylove
2009-09-19 . chapter 6
LOL ^_^ Whats that river Harrys swimming in? Oh yeah denile ^_^ UPDATE SOON ^_^ ^_^ ^_^
love peace and chocolate ^_^ ^_^ ^_^
Blessed Be ^_^ ^_^ ^_^
Cazzy ^_^ ^_^ ^_^
animeangel088
2009-08-09 . chapter 5
Great chapter! It is very interesting to read. Please update soon!
charlie-becks
2009-07-24 . chapter 6
aw all he wants is love :) i look forward to ur update, and the date between harry an draco :D
DMHPsasunaru
2009-07-17 . chapter 6
I hope Harry gives in to Draco eventually and that Draco is the father of the future baby! The new weasley couple is quite annoying and I don't like them one bit, though their reaction to Draco was amusing! I hope you update soon.
Tuuna
2009-07-14 . chapter 6
Hmm... I noticed that he only asked them not to tell his godfathers ^^ So there is a loophole, right :D Because really, I don't want little Harry pregnant with some stranger when Draco obviously is "Mr Right" :D
raineynight
2009-07-10 . chapter 6
I really am about to burst out laughing at some of the funnier things that the characters of this story do! [Not at you!:D] I really hope that you update with a really long chapter soon!
sweetteetwo
2009-07-10 . chapter 6
I was glad to see a new chapter. Draco is going after his man, and I like how he won't accept no for a aswer. I can't wait to see what Fred and George tell Lucuis or Draco when they arrive at the manor. Update when u can.
LadyFreda
2009-07-06 . chapter 6
Finish the Please Because it Was getting Good.
Ilamay
2009-07-05 . chapter 6
I love it!! So sweet. Thanks for writing it. :)
Arctic0Kitten
2009-07-05 . chapter 6
Kitten: Do more do more do more do more! *continues the chanting*
Tid-bits: ...I LOVE DE STORY! When will chap 7 come in?!

Kitten & Tid-bits: PLEASE UPDATE ASAP! =3 <3
Sirius about Remy
2009-07-04 . chapter 6
Good story. Poor Harry, he didn't make the twins promise not to tell Draco. I can't wait to find out how Draco plans to do with this bit of information. Please update soon.
bahlovkarizma
2009-07-04 . chapter 6
I really like this story, can't wait for an update
brighteyes343
2009-07-04 . chapter 6
cute chapter
love the story
Dreamfantasy69
2009-07-03 . chapter 6
Yay update! At least the writer's block left for a while. Can't wait for more! n_n
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