 pinklady 2009-11-30 . chapter 4 This is the most ridiculously horrible thing I've ever read. Really? Impervious?! Have you even read the books, do you even know what you're saying?
You just dump random bits of information and back story into paragraphs, you don't flesh out the characters or write a decent plot. It's not a bad Idea, people turning on Harry, Harry finding kittens, Harry wanting his own family, Harry running into his old school enemy, sparks flying. It makes sense and could actually be a good story but you've completely mangled it. If this were a first draft it wouldn't be so bad, you could revise and edit until you got to a good story, but posting this...as it is...is really a crime. Its awful. Sorry but its true. Keep trying but try editing and getting a beta reader before putting your stories out for unsuspecting readers to stumble upon. 1/5 |
 Cazzylove 2009-09-19 . chapter 6LOL ^_^ Whats that river Harrys swimming in? Oh yeah denile ^_^ UPDATE SOON ^_^ ^_^ ^_^
love peace and chocolate ^_^ ^_^ ^_^
Blessed Be ^_^ ^_^ ^_^
Cazzy ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ |
 animeangel088 2009-08-09 . chapter 5Great chapter! It is very interesting to read. Please update soon! |
 charlie-becks 2009-07-24 . chapter 6aw all he wants is love :) i look forward to ur update, and the date between harry an draco :D |
 DMHPsasunaru 2009-07-17 . chapter 6I hope Harry gives in to Draco eventually and that Draco is the father of the future baby! The new weasley couple is quite annoying and I don't like them one bit, though their reaction to Draco was amusing! I hope you update soon. |
 Tuuna 2009-07-14 . chapter 6Hmm... I noticed that he only asked them not to tell his godfathers ^^ So there is a loophole, right :D Because really, I don't want little Harry pregnant with some stranger when Draco obviously is "Mr Right" :D |
 raineynight 2009-07-10 . chapter 6I really am about to burst out laughing at some of the funnier things that the characters of this story do! [Not at you!:D] I really hope that you update with a really long chapter soon! |
 sweetteetwo 2009-07-10 . chapter 6I was glad to see a new chapter. Draco is going after his man, and I like how he won't accept no for a aswer. I can't wait to see what Fred and George tell Lucuis or Draco when they arrive at the manor. Update when u can. |
 LadyFreda 2009-07-06 . chapter 6 Finish the Please Because it Was getting Good. |
 Ilamay 2009-07-05 . chapter 6I love it!! So sweet. Thanks for writing it. :) |
 Arctic0Kitten 2009-07-05 . chapter 6Kitten: Do more do more do more do more! *continues the chanting*
Tid-bits: ...I LOVE DE STORY! When will chap 7 come in?!
Kitten & Tid-bits: PLEASE UPDATE ASAP! =3 <3 |
 Sirius about Remy 2009-07-04 . chapter 6Good story. Poor Harry, he didn't make the twins promise not to tell Draco. I can't wait to find out how Draco plans to do with this bit of information. Please update soon. |
 bahlovkarizma 2009-07-04 . chapter 6I really like this story, can't wait for an update |
 brighteyes343 2009-07-04 . chapter 6cute chapter
love the story |
 Dreamfantasy69 2009-07-03 . chapter 6Yay update! At least the writer's block left for a while. Can't wait for more! n_n |