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numberman123 2008-08-30 ch 1,	abuseI'm sorry if I really can't say anything consturctive since it's like, four in the morning where I am and I haven't gotten any sleep. I love your work, there is always something interesting to find in your stories. I like this one in particular, along with the Beyond stories XD, mostly because I find this something so insightful to L's personality. And I think it would be just like L to think this, and it would be so absolutely perfect that those would be his last thoughts. Great work! Keep writing.
Star Jinin 2008-08-17 ch 1,	abuseAwesome! I don't know why I never reviewed. Mebbe it's because I underrate stories ^.^ I liked the comparison between Raito and fire. Very true. nod nod It's very like L to think that way. How deluded to think that after all the methods HE used to catch Kira, that he would be beautiful. Well, I suppose it's because he partially doesn't know better. It's a very sweet drabble. :)
PrettyKittylicious 2008-05-26 ch 1,	abuseThis fic was so sad! cries I hate that L died! I love him so much!! And yesh he's HAWY and sexy. Even though at first your like-"hey he's not as hot as they were making him seem" But your mom's right. I mean L may not be exactly gorgeous and hot, BUT his personality and his glompabilty make him so likeable and hot!! But anyway this fic was beautiful and your talented ^_^
Seven Tenths 2008-05-26 ch 1,	abuseI loved it!
halloskye 2008-05-25 ch 1,	abuseVery nice! Wonderfully descriptive & it lacks the out-of-character cheesiness that tends to occur in Death Note fics. Definitely worth reading :)
Loren 2008-05-18 ch 1, anon.	abuseOh wow. Just wow. That was absolutely beautiful. You have such a talent with words. I envy you completely.
dday Editor 2008-05-08 ch 1,	abuseWow. :D That was brilliantly written! I LOVED it.
sasunaru-yaoi-4evea39 2008-05-07 ch 1,	abuseOh...mi...yaoi! I luv how u make L think those as he's dying! I luv it! Keep up the good work!XD
love lawliet 2008-03-07 ch 1,	abusesniff sniff, so sad, but really well written...:D sniff sniff
Yukino-chan 2008-02-29 ch 1, anon.	abusei would say ur mum's advice is correct! :D
kitsune-grl 2008-02-13 ch 1,	abuseL isn't necessarily good looking.but his actions make him so adorable.its almost impossible to not love him.this was a very...interesting...story.to say the least.i really like it.there's something dark and twisted about this but it makes it seem really beautiful and its almost as if you can actually see this happening.i really do love it.you're a wonderful author.
Just A Reviewer 2008-02-11 ch 1, anon.	abuseBeautiful. Made me chuckle after a moment about how fan girls can turn anything into yaoi goodness, but I liked it. I would've liked a bit more symbolism, and perhaps some less clichéd metaphors when referring to Raito (but clichés are clichés for a reason) and perhaps some more repetition of the italised 'so very beautiful'. Sounds like it should be whispered in an earnest voice with half-lidded eyes. But, yup. Repetition is a very useful tool when trying to achieve this tone, which I got still, no worries. Oh, look...I'm referring to something as silly as spelling in a comment. Just shows how good you are, mm...I really dislike only having that to comment on. Anyway. You repeat this small typo/thing a couple times. 'fore he shown'. Should be 'for he shone'. Shone because it's past tense of 'shine' and that's what you mean, isn't it? and 'for' and not 'fore' because it would only be 'fore' if there was an apostrophe before 'fore', as a shortened version of 'afore' or 'before'. Like...hmm..." Yeah, well, yer better scarper 'fore the ole mister comes back." Why I felt the need to do that in a street urchin's voice, I've no idea... I've always had a problem with perfection. For something to be perfect, it'd have to be dead, frozen. You can't go anywhere from perfect. It's the stopping point, really, isn't it...
Scrat 2008-02-05 ch 1,	abuseShort does not always equal bad. It was beautifully written and it's certainly a topic I think many people agree with. It's an interesting view of the end, where it's no longer about who won or lost, who was ahead, but at the same time it was.
samiseriouslyam 2008-01-22 ch 1,	abuseThis was pure brilliance! I really like how you showed Light when he wasn't Kira to Light now, and L and his inherent nature compared to Light at these times. 'Even in death, he feels like he’s the one glowing now. He feels at home, almost, if slightly uneasy, with the darkness that is closing in around him. A darkness so pure and everlasting that not even the beautiful light can help him see.' That was a beautiful ending. Your serious stories are genius, and your fluffy stories are insanely cute, and your funny stories are hilarious, and your smexy stories can somehow be all of them combined, and that is why I am adding you to my alert list. Because you rock.
LetThereBeRaito 2008-01-20 ch 1,	abuseIt's heartbreaking:( In a beautiful way. characterisation is perfect well done! Now i shall scan your profile to see if there's anymore! xx

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