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| Wendy Walker 2008-07-14 ch 1,  | abuseHeh. Seagull. Weird image of Kagome with a seagull beak, thank you very much. Sugar is sweet, you know. Also, I am using your definition of sweet being something with a lot of heart, because it makes sense and it's very concise, which I like. I like sweet things. |
| kokoronagomu 2008-06-02 ch 1, | abusethat was 'sweet' too. |
| Dark-Lady-Shippo 2008-05-13 ch 1, | abuseit was sweet, lol ~Shippo |
| Question the Majority 2008-03-04 ch 1, | abuseI'm always, always impressed with how you portray InuYasha. Most people don't seem to understand his conflicting emotions and the deep-rooted self-hatred he has for himself. And I love that you soften Kagome's personality! *laughs* I understand she's a teenager with her own mood swings, but she can be a little too harsh with the poor guy sometimes. I like seeing how you make her more gentle with him. |
| KataangNutyBabe 2008-02-24 ch 1, | abuse:) Pure torture for him in the beginning. Kiss makes it all better. :) |
| Breann Johnson 2008-01-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseAdd more to the story it's so so sweet! |
| Kagomerocks08 2008-01-15 ch 1, | abuseOMG loved it. It was so... Sweet |
| Midoriko Jewel 2008-01-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseAww, fluff...fluff should be a catagory! LOL I knew 'Kikyo' meant bluebells, but I never thought of that when reading your story. Thanx for mentioning that! I really like how you only made "Kamome" kiss his cheek only and not glomp and rape him like some people do...geez. You can't get good fluff without having a lemon! I dont want lemony fluff! I want PURE fluffiness! ... RR (reviewer rant)Arigato, for making the world a shinier rainbow!! MJ |
| azuyama-chan 2008-01-14 ch 1, | abuseAw... that was sweet. Especially the ending, when Kagome told Inuyasha that he was the sweetest. I love the way you added the 'seagull drawing'. |
| hushedthoughts 2008-01-14 ch 1, | abusethis story was really sweet! i liked it alot! you did a great job! but you always write good! |
| A Wilting Rose In the Mist. 2008-01-12 ch 1, | abuseah! that was so kawaii! i loved it...so umm..sweet...lol |
| wbaker5286 2008-01-12 ch 1, | abusesweet isn't a word usually associated with inuyasha. you made it work. i loved your explanation of the word. seeing it through kagome's eyes gave it a different light. i loved this piece. it gave a great start to my day. |
| mysterychild 2008-01-11 ch 1, | abuse... Where's my toothbrush? I better brush before I get a cavity ^.- Very cute to say the least. |
| wildmage89 2008-01-11 ch 1, | abuseVery cute. Absolutely lovely |
| Silent Scribe 2008-01-11 ch 1, | abuseThis is going to be cliche by now, but...HOW SWEET! *^-^* You really do make me feel sympathic towards Inuyasha's inferiority complex. *sniff* Also you included a humorous scene with Kagome's friends. Ask me, they all look like her just with different hair cuts. And before I forget, I've alwasys enjoyed your inside jokes on the Japanese language (ie. Kagome and the seagull). Loved it! |