Interesting piece - I like the lead-in, especially.

this is without question the most creative fanfic I've ever read...you really stepped out of the box and just let yourself write without boundaries. I really enjoyed your creativity here, and I'm putting this on my favories list.

This is great! Really shows the sevvy love :D

Thanks so much for writing this - it was simple and beautiful and sad. The last two lines especially were gorgeous.

Beautiful...

This was great. It shows how a few words can say so much. Very poetic.
“Thrown into the den of snakes, arrogance was the only thing that kept him alive.” I love this line.