This is the perfect dose of angst for a character like Ukyo. You did it very nicely. Good job. :)

Impressive beggining. The pacing was awesome and I liked how you explored Ukyo's current stance in the world.

I would point out a mistake or two, but I didn't catch any.

I hope to read more soon.

Neato. Well written. Nice.

Pretty good one-shot, really sad. I love Ukyou and you described her well in this one.