you are a great writer, kept my eyes glued to the screen until the end. god, im close to tears, you know that?

That was really good.
I guess I'm really soft, though, cause I cried.
*tear sniff*

Oh my gosh, this is great! I always loved deathfics, especially KibaHina ones. Not sure why. Also, I love the brotherly role Shino played in this. Great job!

KIBA!... wow that was sad i liked it though. The whole story was good

wow... uve got talent!! and its my fave naruto match 2!! YaY!! when i manage to activate my account, my first storys gonna be a kibaXhina one... any tips??

I've read all of your fics and I've gotta, say I've loved them ALL. Seriously, I'm not joking their all amazing. Please make more, and I can't believe this was your first fic, it's so sad!

It made me cry.It is a happy-ish fic.I love it, though.Byezezezezezezezezezezez!0_0

awh, thats so sad, both kiba and hinata die in this one, but it was a very good and very sad story

OMG!! That was awsome. Dude, I'm still crying. I loved it! That is what i like to see. Yeah kiba an Hinata make a great couple. Well hope you can write more of em. See ya!

That was so sad. Now I have to go fix my eye-liner.
-Ltn.Barbie

Aww... that was good but sad =.( Good job


TORA OUT *sniff*

OMG THAT WAS SO GOOD! (Sniffle) this is the first fic ive ever cried over GREAT JOB! KIBAHINA 4EVR!

It was so sad,but I still loved it.It had some grammer errors,but other then that it was great.I really liked that Shino was acting so brotherly,I'm a BIG kibahina fan and a Shino fan girl and a tragedy lover,so this story was perfect for me!!I hope you write more fan-fics,I'll definitely R&R if you do.

Even if it was supposed to be sad, I laughed. But I always do.

It was good.