(ive been crying for 2hours straight) i love this story so much its sad but sweet in the same time
kibahina 4ever

That was beautifully done! I love how you incorporated both Kiba's and Shino's love for Hinata in this! It was so sweet and so sad, I loved it!

omg this was soo sad but it was a good story

it made me cry hahah it was great

I loved it!

I'm not really a big fan of KibaHina but this was fantastic!

Keep up the awesomeness.

Peace!

(:

-Kirra.

you are a great writer, kept my eyes glued to the screen until the end. god, im close to tears, you know that?

That was really good.

I guess I'm really soft, though, cause I cried.

*tear sniff*

Oh my gosh, this is great! I always loved deathfics, especially KibaHina ones. Not sure why. Also, I love the brotherly role Shino played in this. Great job!

KIBA!... wow that was sad i liked it though. The whole story was good

wow... uve got talent! and its my fave naruto match 2! YaY! when i manage to activate my account, my first storys gonna be a kibaXhina one... any tips?

I've read all of your fics and I've gotta, say I've loved them ALL. Seriously, I'm not joking their all amazing. Please make more, and I can't believe this was your first fic, it's so sad!

It made me is a happy-ish fic.I love it, !0_0

awh, thats so sad, both kiba and hinata die in this one, but it was a very good and very sad story

OMG! That was awsome. Dude, I'm still crying. I loved it! That is what i like to see. Yeah kiba an Hinata make a great couple. Well hope you can write more of em. See ya!

That was so sad. Now I have to go fix my eye-liner.