Wow. I forgot everything else I had to do tonight, I was too absorbed in reading and enjoying these last two chapters. Hope the Asgard don't fall for Carter's trick. And will John rescue Jeannie? Can see how no one would believe it if he did. I'd love to find out what happened.
Good luck with NaNoWriMo. Never could manage it myself since I tend to simply run out of ideas when under pressure.

You just became my favorite person! Hope you update again soon. I love this story.

I knew it, I knew it. As I was reading I got this feeling it was Jeannie even though I remember that they had a body. I am on pins and needles wondering how Jeannie got wherever she is and a body looking like her dead during the accident. Obviously something happened while John was unconcious.
Great update. I like it when I can read a little about what is going on with everyone. Thanks
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YAY!! Jeannie is back, Jeannie is back! but... uhm.. wait a second there... how's that even possible?? not that I'm complaining, I love the Jeannie & John couple... can't wait for the next installement, see ya!

OK - I didn't see that one coming. Nice scenes between John and his dad. Hope you write again soon

I'm sure everyone is going to say this - Wohoo!

o good twist :)

Well, I've just pulled the longest consecutive fanfic reading spree I have ever had, and that was just reading this story.

Please update again soon, I really love this story. At first, I was a little worried, because I cannot see the Sam we know being so mean, but if she's Andurian...

Ari
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You are so right Thor. I so hope that whatever Sam is doing to herself will not interfere with Thor plans. Nice chapter. Nice that rodney is mellowing out. John does need to talk to someone but what would really help him is Rodney's forgiveness. Soon.
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excellent, so far i love this story.
i really dislike the way you killed of jeanine,
she was a wonderful character and then just "oh yea, she died"
kinda killed me for a few chapters

its not the fact that you killed her that i criticize, i know its life, and death is a part of that. it is the way she died that irritates me. it seriously killed my enthusiam for the next few chapters, i found myself being a harsher critic of small little mistakes that i normally choose to ignore so i can immerse myself into the story.

also there should technicly be a character death warning.

i do give you props, jeanine was a very well written character whom i found myself empathizing with and were she a real person, someone i would very much like to meet.

you have many different plot lines open at the moment and you do a good job of giving them each the right amount of attention without forgetting any of them.

with your main characters you have done something i must admit i have never seen before, you believably took one of the heroins and turned her into the arch villian with no chance of redemption, and you took a relativly minor character "shar're" and made her a strong leading role.
granted you used quite a bit of creative lee way in you version of shar're but that is expected when dealing with a minor character.
your shar're is much more in line with the shar're from the origional stargate movie which is what i like. i always figured the one in the series was poorly written.

i look forward to your next update

Aww, I want to hold the baby too! Nice chapter, as always. I liked how you handled McKay's first step toward forgiving John. I'm interested to see how John's reunion with his dad goes, and if his father really is a good guy here.

This is very good. keep up the great work.

Nice chapter. Glad to hear Patrick does not like Carter either. John needs family right now to help him through losing someone special. He was thinking about the family he left behind so now he can get reacquainted and catch up. This will be good for him.
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Another good one .. my favorite scene was when John was holding the baby and told him that he would teach him football and golf. The moment between John and Rodney was nice as well

I like this. I'm very interested in Mel, and also John's relationships with his father and Rodney. Hope that friendship recovers.