Aww, poor Dilly and Celena... *Huggles them both* I'll bet Celena has the alone complex as much as Dilandau does (hence where HIS alone complex comes from), and having Dilandau in her head probably was the only semblence of company she had while she was in the Madoushi's care. Before she turned INTO Dilly, of course...

Anyway, it'd be cruel of Allen to put her on the spot by making her try to send Dilandau away, but I could see him trying, since Dilandau's so violent and Allen likely doesn't like him that much. ;; With few words you've made this very thought-provoking, which means to me it's GREAT.

-Threshie )

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I like this, very well worked, good prose, the meter crumbles a little bit in the last few stansas but the over all effect is nice.

Sand3

I really liked it.

_ Mreowww! I liiike! Anywho - I read a few of your other poems too - they're grand! _ Really good poet, you are, methinks. Well, we'll talk!

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cool poem... i love the single words... keep it coming (my prayers also go to everyone who died in tuesday's crisis and to the ppl who knew and loved those men and women)

Cool! I love all poems about Dilandau and Celena. There aren't many in Celena's point of view, I saw a couple of your other poems, they are really good and some are funny too :)

Wow...I like it. It's very creative and I like the rhyme scheme. Amaiko (BTW, I'm Meliae, just got a new account...I just have to get that out and into people's heads...don't ask, I'm just weird.)

That was nice, I really liked it.

This in a way is kinda like my fic, 'Traped'. Does that tell you I like it? o

Interesting...made me think

That was really good. I love all the stuff behind the dilly/celena issue - the thoughts they shared, how they managed inside one another's minds etc. I'm already a fan of your writings but this is great also. I hope you write more like this - Tayles can't-sign-in-cos-the-school-computer-won't-let-me

Wow...weird and cool at the same damned time! This is good. Keep up the good work!