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| Nocturne's Kiss 2008-08-10 ch 1,  | abuseLol, poor Keiki. ^_^ Hope to read another one soon! |
| Lorna Reynard 2008-03-25 ch 1, | abuseOkay. I'll start with saying. while yes, I knew there was potential pairing because ones a Kirin I'd always dismiss it... but reading this... I couldn't help but giggling like a school girl through the whole thing... I mean I could SEE Keiki's face through the whole matter... I lie I could see EVERYONES face man.. I;m STILL laughing.. man I love this! |
| Shadows 2008-03-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseyou know what you should do? Make a sequel where Yoko is thinking about it while bathing and Keiki gets tricked into getting in the bath with her? Or just become curious with the carnal relations *laughs* |
| bobbyneko 2008-02-24 ch 1, | abusehilarious. i love this pairing and i love this fic : ) and from my experience, those who can write good humor can often write good serious fics too, so i'm really looking forward to your other fic. just a note though, it's good that you're thinking about not posting your other fic until it's complete, but often to get good feedback and review responses, it's better to post each individual chapter at seperate times instead of all at once. plus if your other fic is suspenseful, waiting a determined intersection between each chapter post draws out the suspense. sometimes i run across really great long fanfics i found that their review count is low since they posted it up all at once. plus the reviews were over the story as a whole, which can be nice, but no individual chapter introspection. of course you may already know this and was planning to do it, i just wanted to bring it up. ANYWWAYS : ) i'm putting you on my author alert list in anticipation of your other story. so you BETTER FINSIH IT! |
| Nikokami 2008-02-20 ch 1, | abuse... I am disturbed... but I am also cracking up... do peaches truly make bathwater sweet?... I like peaches... they taste sweet... |
| oni 2008-02-06 ch 1, anon. | abusegood story^^ |
| Sarah8 2008-01-11 ch 1, | abuseTasted like peaches huh. Interesting. Sarah |