thanks it is a good one

Lov it

Another very good chapter. I look forward to reading what happens next in your fic.

The grammar in this is atrocious and the spelling/writing isn't much better. It's bad to the point that I can't force myself to do any more than skim quickly through a chapter or two to see what the rest is like.

I think you'd benefit greatly from having a Beta (or three) help you out with that. The story itself sounds like you might have a solid idea/plot somewhere, but I can't get through it to find out. I'd be up for trying again though later if it gets cleaned up some!

I hope that Harry gets better without hurting anyone else. Maybe it would be better if Harry and Snape left Hogworts for a little while so that Harry can get better.

FAN!

literally sending get well messages to little Harry Potter, son of Severus Snape.

"Don't worry little one. You will be fine in no time at all"

well done lucius for figuring out it wasn't sirius

You are mean to the baby. But Harry will pull thru or your story will end. Although you might kill him just to prove that you can. I never know with you.

wow! keep goin! i like it! i cant w8 2 read the nxt chap!

Very good thank you.

If Harry become muggle who will save the world. Don't forget, Harry never see a doctor when he was with the Dursley and his magic safe him all the time. If Harry has a problem it's Dumby's fault.

love it so far keep the story coming thank you

hey

love the story please update soon

cullengal101

his magic should protect him severus should get muggle medicine