|Reviews for Harry Potter And The Father|
| wandamarie 10/16/11 . chapter 27
thanks it is a good one
| Mika the Dark princess 10/16/11 . chapter 27
| DarkRavie 10/16/11 . chapter 27
Another very good chapter. I look forward to reading what happens next in your fic.
| Guest 9/27/11 . chapter 1
The grammar in this is atrocious and the spelling/writing isn't much better. It's bad to the point that I can't force myself to do any more than skim quickly through a chapter or two to see what the rest is like.
I think you'd benefit greatly from having a Beta (or three) help you out with that. The story itself sounds like you might have a solid idea/plot somewhere, but I can't get through it to find out. I'd be up for trying again though later if it gets cleaned up some!
| teddybear550 9/26/11 . chapter 26
I hope that Harry gets better without hurting anyone else. Maybe it would be better if Harry and Snape left Hogworts for a little while so that Harry can get better.
| SoulMore 9/18/11 . chapter 26
| stallion-ponyta 9/18/11 . chapter 26
literally sending get well messages to little Harry Potter, son of Severus Snape.
"Don't worry little one. You will be fine in no time at all"
| stallion-ponyta 9/18/11 . chapter 20
well done lucius for figuring out it wasn't sirius
| hotflower901 9/17/11 . chapter 26
You are mean to the baby. But Harry will pull thru or your story will end. Although you might kill him just to prove that you can. I never know with you.
| foxee-chik 9/17/11 . chapter 26
wow! keep goin! i like it! i cant w8 2 read the nxt chap!
| M.E.S 50 9/16/11 . chapter 26
Very good thank you.
| adenoide 9/16/11 . chapter 26
If Harry become muggle who will save the world. Don't forget, Harry never see a doctor when he was with the Dursley and his magic safe him all the time. If Harry has a problem it's Dumby's fault.
| sjrodgers23 9/16/11 . chapter 26
love it so far keep the story coming thank you
| cullengal101 9/16/11 . chapter 26
love the story please update soon
| domsijohn 9/16/11 . chapter 26
his magic should protect him severus should get muggle medicine