Awesome ending! I love how you changed the Lone Power, and how he changed himself. And you did a really good job with explaining the Pig. I'm going to raid- I mean read, your other stories now!

That was excellent. Very good ending, I approve. I liked that Kit and Nita got together so early on, it was interesting to see how they acted after the fact, instead of stopping the story at that as so many of them do. And all the exciting battles and stuff that they actually had to do, too. This story was awesome! :D

Wow. I love the way you described that kiss..

wow great ending! It's good that you left it like this. I'm sorry that I didn't review sooner, this was just sitting in my inbox for like EVER, but I just never had time to get around to it. I feel bad. Well, keep writing. :)

Once again my only criticism would be that I think you could add more to this, more adventure, more wizardry, but in a nutshell you did an awesome job on this story.

Until your next piece,

-Don "QuixoticQuest"

Another insider writer's joke "wishing a book's world was real" "it's more real than you think" ha, ha. Love it.

I still wish this story was longer but since you've said it ends, maybe you should just write another Nita/Kit story instead. I dunno, this screams that it needs a sequel, but that's just me.

Nice work!

Ha, ha "Harry Potter much?" I was thinking the same thing as soon as I read the "He who must not be named" bit.

It's also funny how Kit tries to explain to the Lone Power what Love is, It obviously doesn't get it.

You actually go into detail of the fears and reservations of the characters about past events which is a nice touch and adds layers to the characters that you yourself as a writer have created.

You do Duane's work justice.

All the Best,

-Don "QuixoticQuest"

It's so good! I had to sit through dinner until I could get back to my computer to read the rest of the chapter. It was pretty frustrating.

Anyways, on to feedback. Again, the humor is a really nice touch, I like how the Transcendence Pig is the one who goads Nita into confessing and then refuses to tell Carl or Tom if they're together. Nice work!

-Don "QuixoticQuest"

Ha, ha. I love how you titled all your chapters, funny and fitting. I also like the back forth between Nita and Kit's POV.

It was also funny that Kit got stuck with paperwork. I guess being a wizard can be a cubicle job too.

I'll review again within the next few chapters.

-Don "QuixoticQuest"

Yeah! You finished!.. sorta.

I'm glad you stuck with it and did such a good job. It's more than I can accomplish but I refuse to let my profile be dominated be oneshots as has happened to so many other authors!

I think the story overall was well done. A bit dodgy in places, as if you were affraid to fill in the spaces Mrs Duane has yet to herself. That's okay though and didn't occur very often.

The ending seemed to be missing something, like it was a bit rushed I guess? But I honestly can't think of a way to ammend that with out considerably lengthening the plot, somthing you already said you weren't going to do.

Excellent!
So Says Issac

Wow, I LOVE your story! I can't wait for the next chapter. I want to find out how it all ends! You have so much talent. And not only that, but you make it seem realistic, too, like it's actually something that might have happened in the series. It's SO good! Please, keep writing!

Very, very, good. There can never be enough Nita/Kit!! I'm quite impressed, and wait on tenterhooks for the next chapter.

I found this fic through your Life Happens fic, and I must say that it's one of the better YW fic I've read. The character's aren't very OCC and I could actually imagine all of that stuff happening in the books. I like the two versions of the Lone One in the previous chapter. I also liked how you addressed the issue of finding Roshaun, very realistic, and delt with Dairine's necklace without talking about what the Speech said. Alla in all, a very well done story. I can't wait to read more, and I hope you update soon. Dai!

well, if you are insane, it doesn't show in your writing :)
or maybe it does and this is the product of an insane mind... hmm... either way, it's good!

lol, book characters are more real than you think- nice touch

no sequel? :( darn.
update please

Ow, the explanations made my head hurt!