 CrimsonButterfly94 2009-06-17 . chapter 1I wish i had inspiration like that. Good story, in a weird way. |
 OnlyANorthernSong 2008-11-05 . chapter 1Squirrel? O.o
Great story! |
 just another fma fan. 2008-07-30 . chapter 1 A squirrel? O.o;; scary... I like it. It made perfect sense. You just have to keep it as a running dialogue so you can keep straight who's talking when, that's all. *sigh* I wish I got the funimation channel... All I"ve got are crappy reruns on ON DEMAND. -_- Anyway, I liked it. ^^ |
 Luna October Wolf 2008-07-30 . chapter 1This is awesome! I can definitely see Kyo and Yuki saying all of this (if they didn't get into a fist fight before they could finish that is :) ) Anyway, good job, and keep writing :)
~Myself |
 emo-foxkitten 2008-03-31 . chapter 1that realy was weird. good but weiird! |
 darksownlove 2008-02-07 . chapter 1Yay!first to review^^lol i liked the story, yes it made sense too^^ good job! |