i keep on rereading this. every time it gets better!

LOL!
Aw cute lil' cabbage wrap ^_^
I can totally see this happening. Good job :)

The thing I adore most in your fics is the friendship between Zuko and Toph. He is so nice, sweet, and just all around big brotherly with her. Je adore.

Selina

Cute. :)

"Now she's going to hunt us down with her crochet hooks of doom"

Best. Line. Ever.

This one is so sweet and touching! Aww!

Aw... You're really good at writing Avatar stories! Meep!

totally amazing.

I really enjoyed your story. I especially liked how they found out what toph couldn't eat at the very end.

I really liked this, it was pretty funny.


'crochet hooks of doom', ha.

o god, it's almost 2 am and here I am addicted to zutara fictions. Really, really good ones though so I guess my boy friend will make fun of me for just a little while.
I love the brother/sister relationship between zuko and toph. It really is very sweet.
I hope you keep writing Zutara stories. One for after the end of the show would be good. Just of course without the pairings.

I can't believe I never reviewed! I love it though(:
Especially all the interaction between Zuko and Katara, plus the Zuko and Toph brother/sister kinda thing is really adorable.

aww some sibling toko!always cute!nice story!

You are one heck of a writer. You're writing is very vivid, with strong verbs, precise adjectives, and imagery that appeals to all of the senses.
The dialogue is all very natural, and you capture each of the characters' personalities very well.
Sometimes, when writers try to adapt real-life expressions to the world of fanfiction (the best example I can think of is "Oh, Merlin" in HP fanfics where Merlin replaces God), it comes out very awkward. In your fic, it seems to fit.
Your story brings depth to the characters as they live together and especially as they bring Zuko into the group and learn more about him.
This is an absolutely fantastic piece, and you have a gift.

I laughed, and I laughed and I laughed. I couldn't help it... it was so funny.
But, somehow this maKes me think. aH, before I forget, what's the dragon's heart?
Now, the thing I was thinking about... what if you're right whit the Avatar thing, I mean. And Zuko and Katara had to help Aang to get to the Avatar State being together... That would be great, at least for Zutara fans! jajaja. (By the way, I loved that... sequel (?)I mean part two of the drink series)
Cu.