...This is wonderful. It has this creepy, eerie feel to it that rings true to Ultimecia for me, and I can honestly think of no concrit.

D: This is one of the most impressive FF8 fanfics I've read. I love your details into Ultimecia's background - you painted a very believable development of a psychopath-of-sorts. I also adore your writing style - it's wonderful and ingenious - and how you tied the poetry in. Just... wow.

Interesting stuff, I like the descriptions, they are so very... insane. XD I think you got Ultimecia's weird speech patterns a little off... She does this odd thing where she turns 'c's into 'k's, not 's's into 'z's.

Simply splendid! I love Ultimecia and you've created a very interesting backstory.

This is awesome. I love all the back-arching imagery, and Ultimecia is so interestingly *mad*.

I love this... I absolutely love this.

Very well-written, with a marvelous reason behind her thinking and a fanfic that adds depth to her character. I like how you portrayed the first sorceress- the one with the net- to show that not all fall under the stereotypical schema of homicidal maniacs.

And for once, it's not Rinoa setting that example, but a woman actually killed for it...

It's dark, it's poetic, and it's beautiful.

I'm definitely going to keep my eye out for updates from you- your way with words is utterly amazing. :3

Oh, fabulous! I'm glad you posted this here, too-- still love it the second time around (okay, so it's like the fifth time I've read this, but who's counting--this is THAT awesome.)