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| OtherCat1 2008-07-25 ch 9,  | abuseI'm really enjoying this (I wish the chapter were longer!) I can't wait to see what happens next. |
| squishy the jellyfish 2008-06-20 ch 8, | abuseSigh...I hate computer troubles. Awesome chapter! Want. More. Want. More!! Keep Writing! |
| OtherCat1 2008-06-18 ch 8, | abuseAnother interesting chapter. The previous chapter was also good. It occurs to me that the key trait of Anime!Aion (And to a lesser extent the manga version) is that no matter which way you jump, you're doing exactly what he wants you to do. I'm really looking forward to see more of this fic. You probably need a line between your note and the text of the story, otherwise they run into each other. |
| squishy the jellyfish 2008-05-20 ch 7, | abuseLovely! Can't wait until the next part 8D Lucky, last day of high school! How was it? Keep Writing! |
| squishy the jellyfish 2008-05-16 ch 6, | abuseThis was...BRILIANT! *Hugs* You've done such an awesome job on this, and I can't *wait* until the next chapter comes ^_^ But...it's the last one, no! Keep Writing! |
| OtherCat1 2008-05-15 ch 6, | abuseAh! I wonder if he was asking about what happened to Chrono and Rosette earlier, because he's honestly worried that Chrono might show up and "foil his plans." Nicely done, I hope to see more of this soon. :> |
| squishy the jellyfish 2008-04-05 ch 5, | abuse'So,humanity may have the ability to learn, but they also have the ability to be superb jackasses, just like the first two humans.' AHAHAHAHA! Loved it ^__^ Keep Writing! |
| OtherCat1 2008-04-04 ch 5, | abuseNice chapter. But way short (G). The way you described putting it together is pretty much the way I do. Bits and pieces until stuff starts coming together. (G) Skim through Genesis, Exodus, Psalms and Acts until your eye catches on something. Psalm 82 tends to remind me of Aion and the Sinners, particularly 5 through 7. The book of Job is pretty nifty, but most likely doesn't have a lot to do with the story. |
| snekochan 2008-03-26 ch 4, | abuseHm. Poor Gab. The party was pretty fun though...ah, everyone love a smooth talker! |
| squishy the jellyfish 2008-03-26 ch 4, | abusePerhaps instead of going over work at nine-thirty at night you could send it to someone to look over...? Just a thought ^__^ Anyway, I loved the update, I loved your writing, I loved...basically everything! Will there be a pairing in the story? Keep Writing! |
| OtherCat1 2008-03-25 ch 4, | abuseAnother really good chapter. Not sure what Aion's up to here, I really look forward to finding out. |
| OtherCat1 2008-03-04 ch 3, | abuseI liked the chapter a lot. |
| squishy the jellyfish 2008-03-03 ch 3, | abuseExcellent update! Keep writing! |
| squishy the jellyfish 2008-02-23 ch 2, | abuseHm...very interesting. I look forward to your next update! Keep Writing! |
| Nightside Guardian 2008-02-07 ch 1, | abuseThis is quite interesting! i'd love to see how it goes ^_^ |