dude that was sweet.not so much scary as totally intrigueing.

Holy crap. That was freaky

Wow I love your story! I'm not familiar with fear street but this is cool. the way how milla can kill people is nice

M'kay, I shall be honest.

I really liked it.

...But, the chapters, they're so plinkin' short that it's not funny. I apologize...

Anyway, good job. A few grammar things, but whatever, I'll let it pass. xD

~Alice

It was great, it was terrific, IT WAS REAL GOOSEBUMPS. I loved it.

ep thats quite creepy
sent shivesr down my spine lol
gossh. she shoved a scissor down at her chest?
i wouldnt be able to do that... how painful.

this is an awsome story, i luv it

i read all 3 books to the fear street series:
The Betrayal,The serceret, and The SOMTHING
it was about Angelica Fear's past and her family tree and all the evil between the Goodes and Fears
its a good series u should read it, if u havent already

It's a cool concept, but there isn't much description so far. If you elaborate and set up the plot more, it'd be so much better.

hy lovergirl i loved ur fearstreet story.it was really great u said dat u wanted more ideas i think u shoul let da bad guy win.good guys are winning all da time.anyway ur a really gud writer

I actually didn't notcie the resemblance to Harry Potter until you pointed it out. Nice monologue!

Wow. Glad Rob's finally taking a hint, and that Milla's starting to get her old self back.

Super weird! Although at the same time MEGA cool! Keep writing!

This is awsome so far!

Omg. This is the greatest story ever!
Keep going, please!!

I'm certainly waiting for the end! Has Milla become some kind of... human Avatar for Angelica Fear? That'd be creepy, but cool.