What a great story! I enjoyed reading every chapter. I like at the end how through Getraer, you're able to redeem Melanie's character a little even after all the horrible things she did.

Congratulations on a story well done! You wove a wonderful tale with suspense throughout... nicely done. I can't believe you had her die of a heart attack due to smoking though! :( I'm not upset at her death per se, but... I dunno... our boys and those murdered officer's families were robbed of any kind of justice, you know?

Eventhough Ponch said you need to forgive and move on... ::Sighs:: I was slightly disappointed in the ending. But enough of that. You have a great message at the end that I hope people will take to heart... as hard as it might be at times. Great Job. :)

WOW... going after Jon again!?!? Yay for undercover cops! I'm glad they alerted the CHP and were able to protect our boy! :)

I hope they get her the help she needs. She's created her own living hell, because I know that people who have been abused like her have been able to heal and move on in some capacity. And boy does she need help!

now... we get an epilog (or chapter 14, right?) :)

Good job on the re-write. While the original certainly carried the power of shock value, the subtly of the re-write makes it just as powerful. It's a good author who can listen to her readers and adjust accordingly. Kudos to you!

Melanie's off to Montana, huh? Interesting. Definitely outside CHP juristiction, though. Hm... I hope they catch her soon, with some heart-pounding drama to go with it! :)

Great Job on a difficult chapter.

The plot thickens as the lady in question escapes for a while. I have no idea where you're going next with the story and I really love that.

wow...Melanie is a little loose with info huh? Nice descriptive chapter. Great job!

Uh oh. I think that it might not be a smart idea for Ponch to visit with Melanie! Can't wait to read on.

Wow, no wonder Melanie is extremely messed up, she really needs to be locked away forever, but given some psychiatric help on top of it. What a horrendous past to live with. I thought it was a little silly of her to drop all those clues to Ponch at the restaurant. She must think CHP's are dumb, since they aren't detectives. Well, maybe she is dumb in that way, but maybe, she has something else dastardly up her sleeve and doesn't care if the know. I'll have to see how this all ends.

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Ok... this chapter was Awesome! Good descriptions... LOVE the colors and scent... very nice touch.

I have to laugh at Melanie's "stupidity"... is she LOOKING to get caught, or is she just giving blondes a really bad name? LOL She's not as clever as she thinks, is she? I just hope she doesn't strike our boys again! (oh who am I kidding, yes I do! I love me some JonAngst! LOL)

I can't wait to see how it ends! This is coming along very nicely. :D Keep up the good work! :D

Way to go Ponch! Sounds like he's almost put all the pieces together but Funny Face has been pretty good so far in covering her tracks. Is there another little twist before the finale?

Gald to see that Ponch is still in one piece. Ponch at a library, the mind boggles.

Hm... now what's Ponch up to?

Love this story, am hanging out for the next chapter. Is it Jon's turn to save Ponch? Or will Ponch not get into trouble broken ankle and all? Can't wait to see what happens next.

Very well written you have captured the CHiPs characters well. Am looking forward to your stories with the daughters of Jon & Ponch. Something different.

GARH! Ponch should have put 2 and 2 together and realized Melanie Mitchell IS FUNNY FACE! Unless..he has something up his sleeve we don't know about! Can't wait for the next chapter!

First I must apologize, if you have responded to my reviews, FF has decided to play games with me and not send me ANY alerts in months, so I'm 2 chapters behind but catching up right now..I don't even get my own reviews!:(

Okay...this was a good chapter...and very creepy at the end...bodies are just piling up everywhere and it's totally scary.