Nice job! Luv it! Update soon!

Loved the chapter and all but who in The Dark Forest is Chumly the Dog

GAH! Cannot wait! MOAR! NOW! P

Wow... hey can I help with the editing?

I hate Berryfur *narrows eyes*

*huggles Eaglestar plushie*

I loved this one! Once you start reading this you can't stop! Great job!

WHAT? NOO! D: Great job, Patronus. Sorry, I couldn't read the story sooner. Damn High School.

wow

HI PATRONUS! Good chapter! GO LEAFPAW! Then again, I am Leafpaw. Man, Snowstorm35 is slow at editing. If snowstorm25 sees this, don't hurt me. But the chappie was good, then again this is the thousandth time i read it.

Leafdrop OUT (I wanted to try doing that even if mistheart13 thinks its weird)

I really diid like that why did Fernheart have to die? She had her wholelife ahead of her, with her kits, her warriors duties,and lots of other stuff. Antyways, i really did enjoy it. (Oh yea, don't forget to write,or type the third version!)

I luv it

Ok, I saw A LOT (no offense) mistakes in that, but it was really good! Update soon!

I'm back again! Update, please!

EyeofTheTiger

I like it! Er, your spelling could use a little tweaking, and the grammar is a touch off as well. The comma goes before the quotations. The first chap is good!

-Cloudy

Wow that is so sad!

I'm here, and lovin' it! But don't forget my plushie! Anyway, update, please!

EyeofTheTiger

one again, great story patronus! you should've let me fix ALL the spelling mistakes first though...