aw, soo cute! ^^

that is just too adorible!!i think i'm glad it came out tjis way, it's reallt nice. :D

thanx
-s.o

Good story. I liked it. I could imagine both couples.

I think it's really interesting that you have an ambiguous set of characters -- but at the same time I think that makes it feel generic and unmoving. It's got the right sentiment but nothing concrete to make me really feel it, you know? If it was definitely Bakura I think it would be a completely different set of emotions than if it were Yami.

I think it's cute and has potential -- I really like that you address the idea of a transition between sharing bodies and having separate bodies -- but I don't know if it hits the mark for me.

Cheers! =D
- Ashley

I really liked this story.. It shows that even though he's known to be violent and sometimes uncaring he really does love Ryou.. Great Story...