I notice you chose a first-person style similar to mine, a very good narritive choce. Got your colors a bit off w/ link, but other than that, it's what looks like the good start of a good story. I'm hooling forward to seeing just how evil you can be w/ link, mwahahaha! XD

Hmm... I'm not quite sure whether I approve of this type of evil...

Oh, who am I kidding? I love evil!

p.s. Link was blue-grey white. Not green. But other than that, great.