 tamaraneangirl 2009-11-25 . chapter 5This is such an amazing story! I've read others with the same general storyline before, but stopped reading them- yours, on the other hand, I've become obsessed with!! It's so good! I'm having so much trouble making myself read slower so that I don't finish up all the chapters I still have to read too soon. Please continue to update and I can't wait to read the rest! |
 Somewhere In Time 2009-11-22 . chapter 22GAHH I can't believe you finally, finally updated!! I could sing!!
Anyway, I LOVED this chapter, both because it came after a long wait, and because it was well written. There are some typos - it should say "both" not "bit" where Dick & Gar throw up.
I guess the f-word would be more...fitting (or you could use merde, it's a French cuss word that is the equivalent of sh**) but well, the language must be kept within boundaries, I guess. :) |
 chessvain 2009-11-15 . chapter 22i tried to review this earlier but the system seemed to be broken. any ways this was pretty good and it sets stuff up for the next chapter pretty well. it felt kind of short but that could just be becuase not much action happened in it. i liked beastboy's reaction to snapping out of the mind control but bi thought every one else's was some what lackluster. still i liked it over all |
 Mr Joey Bon 2009-11-14 . chapter 2Oh snap, i actually liked this story! I normally despise OC stories to the bottom of my heart... but this, this was magnificent! |
 chessvain 2009-10-28 . chapter 21wow going into this story i'd have never thought that bb and rae's child would be the most well adjusted of the bunch. awesome story your oc's come off very reallistic and beleivable. i might quible alittle with them being able to hold their owen against their parents when two of them haven't hardly even trained. but i guess life and death is a heck of alot of encouragement to push your powers to the max while being drugged isn't. still i liked how you had raven having kaden at her mercy two different times it showed that ravens kick ** and allowed for some touching moments between mother and son. always though raven would make the best mother and makes the best person out of all the teen titans tv show or other wise. |
 Somewhere In Time 2009-09-09 . chapter 21XD OMG I missed you so much! You and your fic, and I can't understand for the life of me why I missed this update. Huh. I mean, I've been checking this all the time...except in August...oh, that explains it. ^^; ANYWAY.
Oh, I wish I could just hug Alex, he tries so hard to be all cool and strong on the outside even when he's not really tough all the way through. "For what?" part...I'd expect Alex to start beating up his dad right then (kind of like a tantrum), yelling "I hate you" or something like that. And break down. That's probably what I'd do if I was in such a situation. I'm just glad the Titans are back! Except Beastboy that is. But he'll come through. I loved the way it happened - Mad Mod...! Hehe, epiphany moment! I've had too much literature classes...D: My literature teacher loves James Joyce and "paralysis" and "epiphany"...
So. Don't leave me hanging for so long please!! |
 TAUT13 2009-08-09 . chapter 21OMG! I can't wait for the next chapter. That joke sounded like something Beast Boy waould try to tell Raven and the others. |
 Star of Airdrie 2009-08-06 . chapter 21wow - I'm current and this is such a good story. The way Dick treats Alex, very good, very nuanced.
Great read, a very, very good next generation Titan story.
Keep up the good work!
LJ |
 Star of Airdrie 2009-08-06 . chapter 16another great chapter - well described scenes
LJ
female hero is a heroine; the opiate streetdrug is heroin, no e at the end |
 Star of Airdrie 2009-08-06 . chapter 13great chaper = Uncle Cyborg to the rescue!
LJ |
 Star of Airdrie 2009-08-06 . chapter 6another great chapter! "our parents were superheros"
very good!
LJ |
 Star of Airdrie 2009-08-06 . chapter 3Here I was about to talk about how cool it was that the teens in this fanfic are so 'normal'... But at least they are 'normal' in the fact they are not perfect and actually have problems and ergo, your story is that much better!
great job!
LJ |
 Star of Airdrie 2009-08-06 . chapter 1I've just picked up this story and its great so far!
Very good writing!
LJ |
 outcast 2009-04-14 . chapter 20 this has been like one of the best TT fics I have ever read! Please update soon! |
 Checkers Lime Viola 2009-04-06 . chapter 20Yay great chappie! |