a rather dark theme but still very nice! i

I've gotten interested in Naruto lately and I was happy to see that you have a few Naruto stories.

Wow ... beautiful! I wasn't expecting this sort of depth for a romance fic; it's delightful to read. I especially love how Ino and Shikamaru got together merely over the years: after all, his intelligence and her Sasuke admiration (or fangirling, whichever term you prefer) are like polar opposites.

As always, you have a way with words that is simply mesmerising. Well done!

Interesting. Neither of them are what each other wants. But they just fit, like pieces of a jigsaw. Very interesting insight. I like it alot. :)

I enjoyed this. A but vague, but it goes along with the tone you're trying to accomplish.
Well done.

This is really good. I'm not normally a fan of ShikaIno (I prefer ShikaTema) but I like how you wrote them here. And I really like how you described the subtle effects their lives as ninjas have had on them.

It was a little confusing at times but overall it was still really good. Very deep. I liked how you explained how they had fallen in love. Keep writing.

FFG- Jo

i am awestruck. your command of the descriptive technique was beyond proficiency. the portrait you painted of the surroundings and the emotions of the characters was breathtaking. a refreshing and unusual jewel in the ino and shikamaru motif.

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