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| Adeline 2008-05-26 ch 14, anon. | abuseCute, I notice that there's some UST going on between Vincent and Yazu(btw I'm glad that you spell his name Yazu instead of Yazoo-Yazoo sounds and looks so ugly! XD) This chapter was amusing, lol Loz clung to Vincent. The talking porcupine? Hm I tried to look up the word 'porcupine'(english is not my first languageXD;) but I didn't find anything on it. Please update soon, I want to know who the talking porcupine is!:D |
| TenshiGosuperu 2008-05-25 ch 14,  | abuseIt's Zack! Whoelse could be a talking porcupine? lol |
| Adeline 2008-05-21 ch 13, anon. | abuseThanks you so much for the update! This story's so freaking CUTE! But I got nervous in the beginning when Kadaj got upset but I SO melted when Cloud hinted that he wanted to bring Kadaj back |
| Shining Goddess 2008-05-19 ch 13, anon. | abuseSuch a sweet story!^_^ Good characterizations! Please update soon! |
| Adeline 2008-05-12 ch 12, anon. | abuseThanks for the update! I admit - I squeed, some parts were so cute, and I love how Cloud thinks of Kadaj as 'cute'! Kadaj is BEAUTIFUL! I thought it was so sweet of Cloud giving Kadaj some presents too and Kadaj's reaction was cuteXD. Bu-but I wanted to read more about Cloud's perverse thoughts ;( And there was some Zack in this fic!:D Please update soon! |
| Nobody 2008-04-08 ch 10, anon. | abuseMoreKadajMoreKadajMoreKadajMoreKadajMoreKadaj! |
| Adeline 2008-03-28 ch 10, anon. | abuseOh some Vincent/Yazoo action, me likes it! I like how you portrayed Vincent and the story itself is getting more and more exciting and I like Loz and Yazoo's brotherly affections. It's cute! Please, update soon!:) |
| Aeriths-Rain 2008-03-24 ch 10, | abuseaww XD yay at vincent taking in yazoo! |
| Aeriths-Rain 2008-03-24 ch 9, | abuseKadaj is being very sweet XD! |
| Adeline 2008-03-07 ch 8, anon. | abuseWhat an informative chapter! And it doesn't mean it's bad, I find it very interesting! Pwt, Kadaj's so much more beautiful than Tifa ever will be, Tifa will only have chance if Cloud goes blind or completely forgets what Kadaj looks like. Anyway GO KADAJ, don't let Tifa take your man!XD I liked Elena in this chapter. |
| Aeriths-Rain 2008-03-03 ch 8, | abusei feel a bit sorry for Tifa, i can see why shes worried and yay for vincent acknowledging the turks inteligence |
| KT 2008-03-02 ch 8, anon. | abuseThere's no competition. Kadaj will win every time, especially when it's Tifa he's up against. |
| BloodyChaosDragonKnight 2008-02-29 ch 7, | abuseI didn't mind the Tifa/Elena part so much. It's actually good to have all the characters in a fic well-rounded...or semi-well-rounded. You're doing a good job so far, had me in stitches... And considering that sometimes I don't even crack a smile at some of the things I write that have other people in stitches, that's a good thing. Though, I do sometimes find the most pointless things amusing. And I'm easily distracted... But still, good job, hope you keep it up. Good luck and health ~Chaos |
| Adeline 2008-02-28 ch 7, anon. | abuseI don't mind Tifa and Elena :) This was longer chapter and as always it's was funny to read! I wished there was a bit more of Cloud and Kadaj but oh well:) I still liked it! |
| Aeriths-Rain 2008-02-17 ch 7, | abusehehe! bad kadaj! |