You write this story very well. Looking forward to more chapters.

Been putting off reading this series for a while. I really enjoyed what you've written so far. I look forward to seeing how this unfolds and who the other players in this contest are. Keep up the good work.

You write amazingly well and draw just as good. I like the fact that you use notes in order to give background. I find that the notes help to push the story along. I didn't see very many errors for someone who didn't have a beta, but there were a few. Some words out of place or an extra word that wasn't needed, but truthfully I didn't find it to detract from the story itself.

O.O

Eh, ya really like Tomoe?

Lolz, she makes a good killer though.

xD

~ManiazAzn

Lady White?

O.O

Man...who dies off first?

xD

~ManiazAzn

M, I'm likin' the story...

Lolz, Natsuki already found Shizuru.

~ManiazAzn