u MUST update this soon! if u dont, i swear i'll die.

thats a good story!!
update soon!

-hpgrl95

Oh please countinue (Nice touch with the subtle vampire reference although I am not a fan of twilight).

Hee hee, Artemis reading Twilight, a guy in my class was given it to him by his girlfirend with all the romanctick bits highlighted. Needless to say she was dumped three days later (like the book)

update!

great story, cant wait for update!

Haven't thought of Artemis Fowl in a good long while, so reading a fanfic based off the story is quite refreshing. I might re-read the book sometime as well. Very good story your writing. I hope you update soon.

Wot! Great so far! Love the character...she sounds real and love the manga thing...and the group she hangs with sort of sounds like mine. I bet you have a group like that too!

Oh and Twilight is an awesome book! I should get around to reading the sequel soon...

Hmm. So far, so good. Rather short chappies, but I think it's still great. And now that I think about it, I'm going to start with those Edward Cullen books. Hey keep it up!

mary sue alert, bigtime, FAIL

Good start and a... um... resourceful story. Waiting for next chapter.

Oh, role playing...I really liked this chapter. Artemis is almost totally in character and Emi seems so...balanced. Yes, she's a balanced character. Great job.

This is a good story! It seems mostly IC, and the OC isn't a Mary Sue, THANK GAWD!! xD

I love how you likened Artemis to Edward Cullen - I agree, especially with his vampire smile!

Update soon!

Well, it was great! Honestly, I didn't like Minerva too awfully much. She was too much like Artemis and too... Mary Sue... *sigh* I can't wait 'till the next chapter! Keep it up!
-tsv

This is a good start, I like the acne, because in pretty much every High School Arty story, his love interest might have normal hair and normal eyes, but she will have perfect skin.
Emi is a little teensy-weensy bit Sueish, but that just be me. Maybe you should take the Sue Litmus test, just in case.
http:// ponylandpress. ms-test.html
just take out the spaces.
Great job.

write more i really want to see how this ends!