such an amazing chapter, update realy son

ok i have read up to ch 16 and i gotta go to sleep but im loving this i dont like caitlin i cried when she turned up and snape is a total bastard but i think you have written him perfectly
xoxo

For the record, I truly believe that Harry Potter had lost his godforsaken mind. This is creepy, and stalker-ish, and down right psycho. I do believe its considered a crime in some states as well. Severus really should have that boy committed, he needs is own private room in the mental ward of St. Mungos. Does he really thinking having Sevie's baby will help him win the man back?

This is definitively a really beautiful story. I'm not fond of MPREG but you did it staying faithul to the characters and the HPSS relashionship is shown in a really interesting way. Bravo, I read it till 3am last night, I just couldn't stop myself.

Love the drama, the adventure, the way everything seems realistic with something so unreal.

Good Start... Not much large grammatical error... Nice smut too.

Aww sweet fic ^_^ ^_^ ^_^
love peace and chocolate ^_^ ^_^ ^_^
Blessed Be ^_^ ^_^ ^_^
Cazzy ^_^ ^_^ ^_^

Wonderful story :)

very interesting story -- interesting way you created for the mpreg. Enjoyed the back story lines as well.

Keep writing.

I loved the entire story. I just found it last night and it was all I could do to stop reading it so that I could go on with normal life. Needless to say this one will be going on my favs. Keep up the wonderful writing and I hope to see new stories from you soon. Until next time. *Waves*

please, please add a scene...I really hope to see sev and harry's daily life^^

thids was the best! i loved it! amazing story!

yay its finished i loved it!! very good i cant wait to read some more of your stuff.

Please add more scenes. The more the better! I love this story and am sorry to see it come to an end.
Is Erasmus just small and slow because he's an 11 year old kid or is it because he is the child of 2 men? Just wondering.

congrats on finishing!
this has been good, i'll miss it.
only write another scene if you have something you want to add though- otherwise it might start dragging.

Love the story. The ending was so sweat.