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Reviews For: Tooty Trevor

Anniebunny 2008-02-06 ch 7,	abuseOh, then what happened? I really like this.
Pasta Masta 2008-01-27 ch 6, anon.	abuseI can't seem to get enough of this fic; either I'm goofed up, or you're a great author, how about both? I love how Tooty's taking after her older brother Banjo, and his, uh, attraction to adventure shall we say. It's cool how Tooty can seemingly have Trevor do anything after reminding him of his oath to be better than Kazooie. Keep up the good work. You watch too much anime, hah!
Pasta Masta 2008-01-22 ch 5, anon.	abuseY'know, it's always a good statement about an author when they frequently update their work, not just leave it for a year or whatever. I am glad to see you actually finishing what you began; an admirable trait, indeed. As for the story? Well, it's level of goodness increases with each chapter, to say the least, I think it's a great piece of literature. You're a creative writer and I do enjoy your work. Never stop writing, dahling... sorry, I couldn't resit saying that. I like Trevor, he seems harsh and distasteful on the outside, but Tooty(much like Banjo) knows better than to judge a book by it's cover, and treats him with kindness and respect, and he seems to be growing a little fond of her in return, like Banjo and Kazooie. Kazooie has red feathers with gold tips, Trevor has blue feathers with silver tips, yellow/gold beak, grey/silver beak, nice contrast. Me and my drones, eh? I have yet to find out the capacity of a review, length-wise.
Pasta Masta 2008-01-18 ch 4, anon.	abuseI said it looked promising, and whadda ya know, it delivered it's promises. This Trevor bird seems to have an equal amount of attitude as Kazooie, but can he top her performance? I like how Banjo-Kazooie is being mirrored here, it'll be nice to see how this plays out, its lookin' mighty fine. That's the first time I've ever been mentioned in a fic, sweet, sweet victory! Hehehehe...
Pasta Masta 2008-01-12 ch 1, anon.	abuseI wondered what happened to Tooty after seeing her photo on that milk carton in Coud Cuckooland's trash can. I like how the Queen talks, it was interesting how Tooty referred to Kazooie as her sister, not just Banjo's friend. This looks promising, please continue.

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