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| Selonianth 2008-09-28 ch 1,  | abuseunique... i like it |
| EllaAngel 2008-09-25 ch 1, | abuseI thought it was perfect! -at first I wonderd where you would find 9 people to work, but the groups of peeple you choose were the best! ~Smile!~ |
| Ellenlome 2008-05-25 ch 1, | abuseVery well written, and an original concept firmly based in canon, something that is rarely seen. I applaud and tip my metaphorical hat to you. :) |
| Uzumaki Naruko14 2008-05-13 ch 1, | abusevery nice story but i find the ending to sudden but i luv the story though. :D |
| Love Psycho 2008-03-07 ch 1, | abuseThis is true...glad you wrote such a lovely piece such as this. Chocolate cake for you...I can't express in words how this makes me feel...'good' is the closest I can get to. |
| Danieru-sama 2008-01-23 ch 1, | abuseAmazing. That was my first thought after reading this for the first time. When I read this story for the second time, I was surprised at how the lesser-known characters (Haku, Yondaime, Moegi, and Udon) seem to act as Naruto's anchors to humanity. When I read this story for the third time, I felt like applauding you. If this is really your first fanfiction here, then I can say that you have a lot of potential as a writer. I hope that you've actually started to write books (not on the Internet, in real life). I truly appreciate this story. |
| Michi P. 2008-01-12 ch 1, | abuseThat was very well done. It was articulate and deep :]. Great job on this! I look forward to reading more of your work. ~Michi P. |
| rjectkd89 2008-01-12 ch 1, | abusewow. this was a really good one shot. I like the way you weaved everyone who was important to Naruto's life into holding the 'tails' of the kyuubi. Really well done. |
| animefan29 2008-01-12 ch 1, | abuseWow. This is deep. And incredably well written. I cant even find words to describe it, well I can, but not in a way that would form a sentence. Thats all I have to say. |
| Randoh 2008-01-12 ch 1, | abuseYes. No. Umm.. No. Its sad if you think about it, that the number of people who keep naruto grounded are so few. |
| HikariNiwa 2008-01-12 ch 1, | abuseThis is very good. It's a very nice piece and it's nicely written. Good work. |
| cutwithoutmercy 2008-01-12 ch 1, | abuseI like it... Good job! |
| sillymail 2008-01-12 ch 1, | abuseYou have done a great job. It was written in great form and it was well thought out. |
| SoraAzami 2008-01-12 ch 1, | abuse*applauds* Wow, that just fits him so well... |
| Starfire201 2008-01-12 ch 1, | abuseIt isn't a bad idea as to why Naruto never let the fox spirit control him. Good for a first effort. |