no offense but this isn't what I call a good story its basically drabble or something.

hahahaha awe

omg i love pikachus ketchup obsession episode!

Uh... Yeah...

haha, nice!

lol i liked it

Well, it was a good story I suppose, but what was the plot? If you made it longer and in more detail, I guarentte that people will read it more! Keep it up.

sincerely,

evan, a fan of aaml

p.s- I am EVAN AAML, please check me out -EVAN AAML

heh (all i can realy think to say)

Okay, but I wouldn't class it as 'complete'

BWAHAHAHHAAHAhahahAhhaha!

For that other story your writing I don't think you should have a love confession yet. I love it when people make fun of them and then they deny it and get all embarrassed. It's so cute -

Short, but cool.

That was really different from what I expected. Not only was it really short, but it seemed different from what the summary portrayed it as. Oh well. Differnt is good. Though, I agree with the Pikachu thing with it's obsession with ketchup (although I only know about that from fanfics), yet I can't say much on the piece on Misty because I haven't really seen too many episodes. Though, this was actually kinda good.

hehe very cute

Haha! That was short, sweet, and simple! *Maura*

Oh that was cute! i read the title and couldn't help but wonder. It was short but cute! you should do like another chap or something! i would LOVE to read!