I love your imagination!

Sequel! I so want to see what happens when Snape comes back from the dead. Especially with Hermione!

These endign were funny as well, but i think I liked teh original much better. however, teh bit abotu the Marriage LAw was great. I'm not a huge fan of marriage law fics, but there are soem really great ones out there. Good fic, by the way. Very well done!

Very interesting indeed . . . I liked the explanation of teh divorce, and teh bit abotu hugo and Scorpius. Scorpius being in Hufflepuff. Hah! Great job. Ah, and a cute little kiss-on-accident.

Aw, thsi chapter was cute! The aprt with her bringing him books was very loving and sweet, and i enjoyed reading that bit. Where's Hugo, though? HAs he gradauted? Anyway, cute cahpter. yorue' very good and expressing a lot of emotion in short stories and chapters.

OH, thsi chapter was poignant. Why is it Granger again? Did Ron die, or was it a divorce? At any rate, it was a bit sad. Aw. Poor Severus.

‘That red-headed brat was yours, then. I had wondered how someone looking like a Weasley would have come to be in Ravenclaw.’

That was absolutely hilarious. That line was great. Loved it. i liek how you built up the suspense. it's very intriguing. It's funny, as well. Hve you ever seen a ghost wear colours? Ha!

I like the first alternate ending better. That was funny..."Grandma?!" lol

Um... after reading the real ending, I didn't grasp it at first but I thought it was really good.

I do love the way you did this story. Thanks,

ROTCGirl

I finally started to review. I really like where you are going with this story. So much so, I didn't want to stop reading it. Please continue as you have a great way with your writing and ideas. Your beta is pretty good also.

Great chapter! I love their interaction! "red-headed brat", indeed! Hahahahahaha!

What a poignant and lovely story! I certainly enjoyed your alternate endings. But I think I liked the one you chose the best.

It does make sense that Snape should become a ghost, doesn't it? After all, your reasoning of him not wanting meet up with Lily is quite plausible. And, of course, he had plenty of unpleasant memories and incidences to torment him ... It is really very sad.

Thanks for a great read.

E.

That was an interesting ending. Keep smiling. :-)

I liked the original ending the best. Though the other two were funny. You should do a sequel for the first ending.
Great story!

There would be another way for that to pan out, which would be for her to be injured, Severus to fetch help and her to survive, and then, having revealed himself, for Severus to be made welcome at Hogwarts and perhaps even invited to teach again.

"Grandma?" LOL

Clever use of marriage law too.