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| Housewoodblues 2008-04-03 ch 1,  | abuseThere are exellent fighting moments, power struggles between Nadia and Doyle.And with this chapter, you show an other side of the relationship, a lovely aspect.The fact that Doyle is impatient to see Nadia, the way they touch each other (when his hands are shaking and she covers them with hers, when he touches her and knows her mood), I like the part with the description of the shape of the mouth(well-written), and a line, which is very cute:"Is it only his imagination or does she sometimes press a kiss on the pads of his fingers?" |
| Lady Celestia17 2008-01-20 ch 1, | abuselovely. |
| madladypoet 2008-01-12 ch 1, | abuseI really enjoyed this story. There was a lot of controversy about the relationship between Doyle and Nadia and you have a really nice angle here. Great story. |
| laura sedai 2008-01-12 ch 1, | abuseAw, really cute. Loved the parallels between the different sections. |
| Tigerlily Brown 2008-01-12 ch 1, | abuseAww! That was cute. I've seemed to run out of Doyle/Nadia ideas, so I'm glad there's still a few people out there. And you know i always love your stuff. |
| Pinkjimmychoos 2008-01-12 ch 1, | abuseAw, so good! Was so excited to see this! I understand about the writers block, but hope yours goes soon because I can't wait to read the rest of "its a numbers game." On the other hand, these are indeed a very good way to keep us Nadia/Doyle fans going and if you want to write more of these then that can only be a good thing too! Was so sweet and touching yet in keeping with character. Yay! |