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Phoenix Noir
2008-08-13
ch 4,
abuseThis is great! I really dig the reverse sexism; it makes me laugh.

So does Seifer, though, I love Seifer, and he always makes me laugh. You capture him rather well.

I do hope you continue soon! Can't wait to see who Zell's Knight is! (Is if I didn't already know.)

Oh, and what's wrong with Squally?!
Dagger
2008-07-20
ch 4, anon.
abuseI feel so sorry for Squall and Irvine. I'm glad Mike was fine though!

Yay, Zell stayed in Balamb, in your face Edea. =p Zell and Seifer are so cute together. ^_^

Can't wait for the next chapter.
oskalaboska
2008-06-10
ch 3,
abuseI know you probably don't mean to but my focus seems to be on Irvine and Squall (not that I don't care for blondes but those two are my favs).

Anyhoo, I like the fact that Zell seems to be more at ease than he was at the beginning and that Seifer has back some of his personality (the politeness and the 'milady' was freaking me out for a second but the 'thing to do' comment was so IC for me) stopped me from abandoning (or waiting until the fic was complete).
Priestess of Silvanus
2008-06-09
ch 3,
abusei defintly like this story.
Philadelphiacheese
2008-05-11
ch 3,
abuseWow...this fic is good. NEED MORE. XP please keep writing it PLEASE :P
Sakura Lisel
2008-04-08
ch 1,
abuse*lol* I like this story already though I'm surprised that Zell hasn't tried demanding that they change HIS title from 'Sorceress' to 'Sorceror', since he's a guy. Then beat up or zap everyone who keeps calling him 'lady'.
Dagger
2008-04-04
ch 3, anon.
abuseZell and Mike seem to get along really well. :D I hope they find him safe!

Poor Zell also for being scared of little monsters. ^_^ Downsides for living such a sheltered life.

Can't wait for the next chapter. :>
AZNsexinezz
2008-03-31
ch 3,
abuseYAY! *huggles* Nice work. You got the lay of the land accurate with what it was in the game. Loving the thing going on between Seifer and Zell keep it up.
Faoiltierna
2008-03-25
ch 3,
abuseOh, my...it's a T-Rex, isn't it? Hope Zell gets to save his life--where's the bouncy 'can-do' kid? I know, I know, with this background I understand why he's so reclusive and shy...but it would be nice to see a little fire...or rather Electricity.

And the part with Squall and Irvine...o, such mystery!

I look forward to reading more :-)
Miyo Yukimora
2008-03-25
ch 3,
abuseI love this story! x3 I'm wondering what Seifer has planned. And poor Zell being treated like girl DX must be really annoying.
AZNsexinezz
2008-03-21
ch 1,
abuseGreat story line. I like it. A whole struggle to find someone to bond with while at the sae living up to expectations of many. I wish more people read fanfics for FF8 on but if only people who visit Noire Sensus could read this one, I'm sure they'd love it.
Dance water, dance!
2008-02-06
ch 2, anon.
abuseVery nice story so far. I really can't wait to read more!

(I also really like the way you've characterised Seifer. Instead of making him a jerk like usual, he's NICE. For that, I thank you.)
Delta Immortal
2008-01-31
ch 2, anon.
abusem. Bodyguard. Wait... let's skip Seifer and go straight to the bodyguard. He needs some lovin'.
Maybe Man-Adel shall keep him company.
;) Lotsa fun. Thanks for the chapter.
Aki Rei
2008-01-29
ch 2,
abusethat was pretty mean of edea!! my heart goes out to zell!! T.T
anyway, i was pretty amused with the guard. hahaha. if i was him, i'd probably be that way too! ^_^
anyway, nice chap over all. i like the eleonor scenes and she's just a cute mother isn't she??
can't wait for the next chap. ^_^
hugs to you. ^_^
Dagger
2008-01-27
ch 2, anon.
abuseWhoa! Edea is such a meanie. >.> I like Eleanor, she reminds me of someone. Trying to pair up Seifer and Zell and everything... ^^ Still not sure if it was coincidence or not that they met. :D
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