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| jagged1 2008-09-02 ch 9,  | abuseThis is one of my absolute favorites. The story so closely resembles the actual show itself with the right balance of action, humor, and romance. Bravo! |
| tshdow 2008-07-30 ch 9, | abusevery pleasant story. Job well done. |
| Bymaga Jones 2008-04-25 ch 9, | abuseThis was a fun story; I enjoyed the ride very much. What would turn this very good story into an excellent story is to have it beta'ed by someone - there were way too many typos in here. It's a shame, because there was obviously so much work put into the story - the characters, the dialogue the plot. Having so many grammatical errors is a true disservice to a story that is in every other way a true pleasure to read. If you ever need somoene to do that, I'd be more than happy to help. |
| RedNex 2008-03-24 ch 9, | abuseSEUQEL! SEUQEL! everybody! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! That was, like, the best story ever! AWESOME! |
| RedNex 2008-03-24 ch 8, | abuseThat was cruel! oah! I thought they were gonna die, and im all like "NO!" and then I read that Hampton got shot instead and then im like "THERES HOPE!" o, that was awesome! this is by far one of the best stories i have ever read! |
| RedNex 2008-03-24 ch 7, | abuseTHAt bit Hampton RIGHT in the **, huh? I love it when Chuck is all brave like that, great job! |
| RedNex 2008-03-24 ch 6, | abusemna! that was, oohh! OMG! ok, uh, AWESOME! |
| RedNex 2008-03-24 ch 5, | abuseGO CHUCK GO! I liked it! no, LOVED IT! WONDERFUL! |
| RedNex 2008-03-24 ch 4, | abuseThe Plot thickens! Eeyahh! Sorry, I just make weird noises in my mind when I read suspensful stuff, dont worry, its a good thing! lol, okay, enough of my blabbering, great job! |
| RedNex 2008-03-24 ch 3, | abuseOoh! I love it! Im hooked now! Great job! |
| lanmwolf 2008-02-19 ch 9, | abuseWow, all in all a pretty amazing fic (action, adventure, and romance, lol). The ending did seem a little abrupt, but maybe that will work to your advantage to you can create a sequel. Nonetheless I will be looking forward to seeing more from you in the future. Again, awesome job! |
| Nemo30 2008-02-17 ch 1, | abuseWhat a great story! I was on the edge of my seat literally! I can't wait to read more fan fics from ya! |
| darksith88 2008-02-09 ch 9, | abuseWhy can't you continue it for another chapter or so detailing what happens after they confess their love for eachother? |
| nattylovesjordy 2008-02-09 ch 9, | abusei loved the whole thing. especialy the last few lines with chuck and sarah. beautiful. i really did like it. LOTS! |
| nattylovesjordy 2008-02-04 ch 8, | abusethat chapter was teeth-chattering. nail-biting. all of which i was doing. it was a seriously intense but amazing chapter. although, i am a little mad with the ending b/c it's not going straight to seeing if chuck is okay. but i know you do that on purpose.. good job too! but seriously! i REALLY loved everything about it, including the hanging ending of the chapter. -sigh- i hope that the update comes soon or else you may end up like chuck.. jkjk. SERIOUS JK! |