Wow. It was really raw, and really realistic. It's so... vivid, I guess. It's quite heartrending, and sad... but it's really well written. I especially like the way you describe the friendships, the happy days, and how close they were. I saw only a couple of small typos. Just read through it, you'll find 'em.

wow that was so good, I was in a friendship of three as well and I think this sums up my friendship perfectly especially the ending. Really well written and very poignant in other words AWESOME :D

I love how you wrote this. The begining needs some work but it still has many beautiful elements. My favourite part would have to be the ending, how you decribed their bond and how sad it was. Really quite sad but beautiful

aww. Ouch. well that is tru all good things come to an end. have you read the manga?

wow. that was deep.

ah, i'm tearing up! really, REALLY deep. i like it.

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