it's not a bad story, but the cussing was way out of place. They don't cuss like we do. The're cussing would be something that would wouldn't know as cussing. That's the only thing that really turned me off to this story.

Geeze, calm down. I just pointed out how incongruous mentioning something

from your adult fanfic is in a story not rated PG. Referencing a story where Dot

apparently slept with her brother isn't just a casual thing you can overlook.

As for the out of character thing, I generally like to read fanfiction that reminds

me of the show ReBoot itself. If a fic's out of character, how exactly am I "being

an ass" by saying I don't care for that? It's not going to drive off the people who

DID enjoy the fic. Stating your opinion is what the review button is FOR.

Ok. I've read the last two reviews and I'm removing Kermit's. His has nothing to do with my story. And yes. The story is very much OOC. Wanna know why? IT'S BECAUSE IT'S A FUCKING FANFIC!

I referr to the GreyHawk Archives story "Dot's The Way, Uh Huh Uh Huh, I Like It" in my story. That's where the sex games and Dot's being a ho comes into play. If you do find the archives, look up that story. It's not very good but it was a story I decided to relate to. Just to make MY Fic much more interesting.

Kermit: Before reviewing a FanFic, try making comments to HELP it. Not to be an ass. You did the latter. Plus, I've read YOUR FanFics. They seemed pretty OOC to me.

SilverTiger: This FanFic was written partly for my amusement and partly for the world's amusement. Let me explain a few things.

1. Mainframe saw the whole sex game cause Mike The TV relayed the game events through himself. (See the GreyHawk Archives story to fully understand this)

2. It's OOC bacause it's how I think ReBoot should REALLY be. I think it would be more interesting if the show was just like my FanFic.

Well folks. I've finished showing you what a couple of asses look like. (Looks at Kermit The Saint and SilverTiger) Try to NOT be like them. Thank you.

I don't know which is worse for humanity: That such a stupid fic was written, or that such stupid people gave it good reviews. You guys can read can't you? Or do you have electronic reviewing machines sticking out of your ass? - Press a button and an automatic positive review pops out. Idiots.

The people giving it positive reviews...besdies from how out of character it is, you *did* notice the bits that said "The user had gotten extremely bored and sent them a sex game. All of Mainframe saw the whole event. Dot and Enzo having interface." and "The sex was better than he could ever imagine. (Hell, after Enzo and the others had their way with her why wouldn't she be experienced?)"

I mean...yeah...just checking to see if it's the same fic we're reading.

This was really really... only was everyone totally OOC but Dot was a ho!

This is a good story, written by a ZZTer I know. READ IT NOW. I used to watch this show, but then they canceled it or something :( Anyway, I think that this is a well written, if not excellent, story (could use a little censorship :) ).

This is a clever lil' story with a strange/cool lil' plot. It's neat how the cubes, Binomes, etc. are personified and given characteristics. Stuff I'd like to see more of include character development, and details about the surroundings. Other than that, it's a pretty cool FanFic. So far, most if not all of the chapters have been fairly fast-paced, which can be a good thing, but at times its best to put in some more descriptions and dialogue to help develop story qualities other than the plot. (Chapter 5 included some really cool descriptions and dialogue, including "Oh my user!" to get in on the comedy aspect.) Overall the story seems intriguing, and I'll keep reading as long as you keep writing, but if I were to buy a book with a similar setup, I would prefer to see some more explanations and descriptions and such.

Since I suck at numbered reviews, just listen to my advice above. And if that still sucks anyway, then this has been a complete waste of time unless I manage to advertise something...

Uh... Buy pork chowder!

Bottom line: A bunch of great ideas, but they're not developed enough individually yet.

it reminds me of final fantasy movie. *thumbs up*

The entirety of this is OOC, pointless, sick, and annoying. Good job.

I don't remember Reboot being like this... nice one, Axikal.

This is a very good fanfic, and well thought out. It has a decent atmosphere and great feel of suspense. I look forwards to more chapters to this story!