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Reviews For: Dear Diary: Winter Whingings

Mrs Hatake Itachi
2008-03-18
ch 1,
abuseNice story!
Britix
2008-03-05
ch 1, anon.
abuseSANDY~~!
I can't log in coz I get told I'm not allowed to repeat review. ):
BUT YEAH,
I JUST WANTED TO SAYY~
HAPPY BIRTHDAY!
n.n;
I'm not sure exactly if it's your birthday YET, but I'm pretty sure it is coz it's March 6th over here and really early in the morning.. sorry, I'm terrible with time differences.. either way, I hope you have an awesome day! X3
*glomps*
reckless-rage
2008-02-26
ch 1,
abuseYou are quite an interesting writer. I might just have to succumb to your spell and become another one of those victims who have you on their favs/alerts lists. But I'm going to keep reading first, 'kay?

I was snorting out loud when I read the part where Akaya attempts to bake a cake. Betty cake?? Seriously...:D Where does he get the time to write down stuff in the diary while baking a cake?? That is seriously...crack...mmpfh I love it! *squeals*

Yes, yes...I do a lot of squealing. Part of my genes seem to have belonged to a rabid fangirl, maybe in the murky past of mine. >.< I shall stop wasting your time now.
serenitatis417
2008-01-25
ch 1,
abuseI wish it would snow where I lived too... D:

What can I say? Seeing things from Akaya's perspective is... illogically simple. And it makes me giggly about how childish and naive he is. x3
Lauren
2008-01-20
ch 1, anon.
abuseLoved this, I love Akaya's little diary things. He has an amazing mind.

My favourite parts of this would have to be, hm...

"8:31 – Yanagi-senpai wasn’t happy that I’d disturbed the one day of the week when he has a lie-in. But I said to him, I said, “Yanagi-senpai, this is more important than your lie-in. The married life of a couple is in great danger. In order to help them, you must tell me stuff when I ask you questions, and then everything will be fine.”" - That's adorable! And I like the 'you must tell me stuff when i ask you questions' bit the most.

"I spotted it while he was looking for it and kicked it away so that it could find freedom and start a new life, maybe as a baker." - The baker thing made it for me.

"three hundred and twelfty-seven tonnes of homework" - 12fty? is that like.. 120? Or is it a brand new Akanumber?

"Ha, Jackal-senpai’s text told him he’ll take photographs of as many bald people as he can so Jackal-senpai won’t feel alone in the world of Heads. Mura-buchou makes me laugh. His sense of humour rocks. But not quite as much as Niou-senpai seems to think, because he read Jackal-senpai’s text and was hysterical for about half an hour." - Genius.

"“Ok, ok, you’re nearly there. Take out a pinch. No, bigger than that" - That bit made me laugh really hard. Don't know why.


At least you are accomadating Rikkai into your busy-nessness. Otherwise it would be sad, these make my day.

I also really liked the last drabblething, but I never had time to review. Keep up the good work and all those other clicheish things!

(Also, Not A Cat is the best pet name EVER)
Roaming Phantom
2008-01-19
ch 1,
abuseAh, long time no see, I haven't give you any review lately, sorry, >.<

Actually I wanna quote this sentences:

You gave me a Rubik’s cube and you’re letting me keep it and I completed two sides which Niou-senpai just can’t do and so he’s gonna be mad as a mad thing and he might come round to kill you tonight.

There were 3 good reason for Niou to murder Jackal... Poor Jackal.

Hey, I got an idea that just pop up when I got my hair tingled my comb lately.. Why human have hair on their head? Was it useful? Why most of people hate bald?(And my answer is: they always see people with hair on their head so maybe they will become uncomfortable to see someone without it...)

Duh, that's just my absurd thinking of my absurdity hair... My hair gone wild if I wash 'em...

but anyway,, Thanks For Updating... XD

*I still hope you will update Operation: Christmas and/or Evil is A Label soon. But, enjoy your time...*
Akazy
2008-01-17
ch 1,
abusenice story as always!! i love Akaya, he's so cute!! ^^

umnn... let's see, mah fave quote is:

"It does that for about a hundred different cakes. What if I just want to bake a normal cake?! What should I do then?!"

and...

"How do I know which tins you can bake in and which ones you can’t? And how can I find a cake-shaped tin?"

Akaya's so innocent (& dumb
LiQuYu
2008-01-14
ch 1,
abuseThank you for the dedication! ^^ You just made my day! ^^ So Yukimura really left for America eh? I wonder if you'll write about his adventures in America. Speaking of which, does Yukimura even speak English? O_o But his text msgs were very amusing. Poor poor Sanada... XD. Let's hope he's stress levels don't go too high. XD.

I really think Akaya should get his trillion billion yen. I live in Canada, the freezing north with 20 feet of snow, hockey and beer. We're famous for having snow, snow and more snow a really awesome national hockey team. And for the first time in my life, I witnessed RAIN in JANUARY. It should be a SNOW STORM, not RAIN. T_T Maybe Akaya has some unknown power to change the seasons in other countries. >_> I demand a snow storm! lol. I'm probably the only person that wishes for a snow storm. XD.

I think my favourite date/part of the story (which is subject to being bias) is January 11, only cause it's my birthday. ^^ =D I reading and crossing my fingers cause I hope you get to that date. ^^;; Anyways, good luck on your exams!!
Wingless-Crying-Angel
2008-01-13
ch 1,
abusewell i didn't actully fall on the floor while laghing but i still laughed! btw...how many stages are ther for niou's "wakingness" ?
Britix
2008-01-12
ch 1,
abuseAww, Sandy!
It's okay, really. ^^
Out of the two options I would have preferred the one you chose anyway!
I don't mean to be such a nag. XD
It's just that I love O:CP so much and I've developed a sort of borderline-crazy obsession with it. ...Hehe...

Wow... so many awesome quotes... :D

"I’m so smart. They should pay me a trillion billion yen to redo the calendar, and then everyone will be happier because seasons will actually make sense."

"What should I do? What should I do?! How did Mr. Wiggles get into Not A Cat’s tank anyway? He must have developed either teleportation skills or dimension-warping magic or little knives on his feet that can cut glass, with special glue on his other feet that turns the webs he spins into glass so he can cut through the side of the tank then seal it up again.

… Or maybe I left the top of his box off. Oops."

"Ha, ha, Niou-senpai lost his earring in the snow somewhere. I don’t know how it came off – it probably ran away from him as soon as the chance came. I spotted it while he was looking for it and kicked it away so that it could find freedom and start a new life, maybe as a baker."

"Ha, Jackal-senpai’s text told him he’ll take photographs of as many bald people as he can so Jackal-senpai won’t feel alone in the world of Heads. Mura-buchou makes me laugh. His sense of humour rocks. But not quite as much as Niou-senpai seems to think, because he read Jackal-senpai’s text and was hysterical for about half an hour."

"I found some holly left over from Christmas! I put it in, just to see if it makes the cake turn into a hedgehog. That’d be so cool. It could live in a little house next to Haruhi’s bowl, and it could prick everyone who annoys me. And it would smell really nice and chocolate-cakey."

(I wish I had a chocolate-cakey hedgehog... :3)

Ooh... good luck with your exams!
(Geez, how many do you have? x_O; I don't think I'm going to survive when I actually have to... what do you call it...? Stu... stud... uhh... -gives up- xP)

It never snows in Australia...
Although it is summer here at the moment.
I agree with Akaya! Seasons are silly.
;-;
And incredibly annoying when around Christmas time everyone's like,
"I'M DREAMING OF A WHITE CHRISTMAS~~!"
But it's all depressed-like because it's so hot and so far from being white... ever... D:

And um... yeah! I hope you're enjoying your... holidays... apart from the revising and studying-ness... and lack of snow!
...:D

*glomps~~*
Ria Sakazaki
2008-01-12
ch 1,
abusekirihara is cute...a kid-like cute. and please more Niou-Ohtori-Shishido please ^_^
Hropkey
2008-01-12
ch 1,
abuseI know I shouldn't complain, because it's not nearly as cold here in Cali as it is in Ohio or Japan or even England as my British friends tell me, but goddamit, it's been FREEZING here! We had 4 storms in a week. That should not be physically possible.

"Yagyuu-senpai explained it was where they were briefed on important school-related things, and he talked at me for ages about syllabuses (I looked it up in the dictionary because I knew it couldn’t be a cross between a syllable and a bus) and boring things."

OMG, syllable and a bus? I busted up laughing just thinking about the possibilities.

I loved the little bit about seeing Mura off too. I'd love to see a drabblething about Mura in America, to see how he's doing and such. Did you decide where in America he is? (San Francisco or New York, the two best cities in the world, hopefully? Especially New York. That city is amazing. And of course SF is amazing, it's my hometown ;D)

Anyways, awesome work, as usual!
KiriharaAkaya
2008-01-12
ch 1,
abuseOkay, first of all, please tell me you were writing this yesterday and the day before yesterday? Because seriously, I was sitting in class and all of a sudden I was like "ljkdamkfathere'sgoingtobeanewdrabblethingsoonicanfeelit!" And my friend stared. XD

Second...

I HATE YOU! T_T No...but seriously...middle of January 8th...I literally screamed. I was like "NO!" and my mom flipped. XD Because I'm still totally denying the fact that he left. Because he obviously couldn't have left. Because the entire team would collapse in a matter of hours. Akaya must obviously not be writing down everything that happened. Because obviously many, many things more have happened. At least, if Mura vanished in the Rikkai in my head, they'd have crashed and burned in like...two days. :P Not kidding. (Question: can't remember if I asked you...but you're a Rikkaithor so if you didn't I must...do they talk to you? Cause...cause they do to me...and other people say the same thing...so...yeah...this probably sounds creepy. XD)

And um...let's see...what else can I say. Well, it was awesome. I especially loved the part about Mr. Wiggles and Not A Cat. I had a friend reading over my shoulder once and you had mentioned Not-A-Cat and she was like "Not A Cat?" So I asked her to guess the animal. She said...monkey. XD (I asked another friend, she said cat.) *nods* I feel very...rambley today. Probably the sugar.

Oh well. I'mma shut up now. For the most part.

~KA

P.S. AHAH! THEREISSOUKEPAIRINTHERE! SOCOMPLETELYANDOBVIOUSLYANDYOUKNOWIT! YOUDOYOUDOYOUDOYOUDO!OBVIOUSLY! XP No, really, THERE IS! AT THE AIRPORT SCENE! AND STUFF! *stops abusing the poor exclamation point*
Flarire
2008-01-12
ch 1,
abuseThey should pay me a trillion billion yen to redo the calendar, and then everyone will be happier because seasons will actually make sense.
*snicker* i think we should use Akaya calendar from now on XD
Yanagi-senpai said once that snails have a foot, but he’s lying, because I checked
Wtf?! O__o? Yanagi shame on you for lieing to sweet little Ayaka!
Ha, ha, Niou-senpai lost his earring in the snow somewhere. I don’t know how it came off – it probably ran away from him as soon as the chance came. I spotted it while he was looking for it and kicked it away so that it could find freedom and start a new life, maybe as a baker. That was fun. He hates it when his stuff gets lost.
The poor earring! live free and enjoy your Nioulessness!
it must be where the teachers get trained for some kind of competition. Like sheepdogs rounding up sheep, or maybe something to do with hoops.
So THATS what my math teacher does in his spare time!
Something to do with keeping “Genichiroh’s” stress levels at a good height (i.e. very high). Ha, Jackal-senpai’s text told him he’ll take photographs of as many bald people as he can so Jackal-senpai won’t feel alone in the world of Heads.
*snicker* Poor Genichirouh is being plotted against, omfg hahaha Jackel's cracked me up!
What the hell is a Victorian sponge? Why would you name your cake? Hmm, maybe you’re meant to name your cake if you’re a good cook. Mine shall be called Betty.
I feel tempted to go out and name my pantry now...so you know nothing will go bad or anything*shifty eyes*
Now, how do you work an oven…?
Poor Ayaka you'll get it eventually*pats head* your sucha good boy ^__^
You can’t win a bet against Niou-senpai, even if he’s betting with someone else. You just can’t.
It's true unless your Yuki-chan!
Roseability
2008-01-12
ch 1,
abuse:( I did not know that Akaya was brain-impaired. XD
Very cute. Are there any pairings?
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