Reviews for The Replacement

Reviews For: The Replacement - Reviews: Page 1 of 6

Olaf74 2008-08-14 ch 1,	abuseI'm lost of words. Your Story is more than Fantastic. Please continue it as soon as possible.
Lerris 2008-04-14 ch 1,	abuseYou really need to fix the formatting here.
MoonstoneCabbit 2007-08-11 ch 1,	abuseMISUSE OF MALLET GAG! Really, writers of Ranma fics who have Akane mallet Ranma into leo, especially for no reason, should be fined! In my reading of the manga, Akane pounds Ranma to the floor with a mallet and uses an upper cut or a kick in the pants to send him skywards. It's about 200 miles from Tokyo to the Masaki shrine. Since when does Akane go super-Saian? Many of the TM characters like Tenchi, Ryoko, Aeka, and Washu have hyper-dimensional powers. And Tenchi can move faster than light when he needs to and is virtually indestructible. Even Mihoshi with her Galaxy Police enhancements could beat Ranma. And now it's "poor never does or says anything wrong Ranma" time. Ranma did a lot that was less than honorable in the manga. Actually Tenchi's mother, Kiyone, was over 200 years old when she died. Tenchi even has an 80 year old sister who looks just like her. If Ryoko wanted Ranma dead he'd be dead. Period. Why are there so many stories in which Mamoru dumps Usagi and Ranma comes along to comfort her in her grief? It's about as overdone as Ranma becoming a Sailor Scout. So Mamoru gets bashed and Ranma takes over. How many fics follow just this same scenario? And of course Ranma gets a major power boost. No surprise there. I'd like to see more crossovers that don't bash or otherwise dispose of good characters so that Ranma can take over.
Tisba 2007-05-09 ch 9,	abuseAbout chapter 9: One hell of a fight. Though, I'm a bit confused as to what happened to Sol. Noticed a small typo: "this one on hour own" = on our own Keep going !
Tisba 2007-05-08 ch 1,	abuseGood prolog. Just a few typo I spotted: "Ranma to wheare" => wear "found something in her Sassami" => in there
Blackdex 2006-03-25 ch 9,	abuseIts a nice piece of work, just what id expect from you, having read several of your other pieces (GO and its side story, and Princes of the moon, I think I also read prime attitude, but i am not sure, i am going to check that out later). Anyway, I really enjoyed this fanfic, you did a good job avoiding fanon, and you seemed to do a lot of research for this piece. their were a few plot items that I could see coming a mile away, but I became wary when I saw dozens that were strikingly obvious, but only one or two actually happened. It’s quite refreshing, giving me a mental work out as I try to figure out how Ranma is going to get out of what ever situation he is in. I would like to comment on two irregularities I found, I think they were both in chapter nine, in one line, it mentions the Jurian Goddess, Tsunami, a term not previously mentioned, and yet the senshi do not question its use. Second, I am curious about the Meditation technique Ranma used to escape being phased into the solid stone, I don’t recall such a techniech in the Canon, and if it’s not in their (it may be, i am only to 15 on the reread, and don’t remember much any further), you should describe it and its capabilities. That’s pretty much all I can complain about. I hope to see this story continued, though i am not going to hold my breath, it doesn’t seem to have been updated recently, I will mark it as a story to watch just in case. I am a big fan of your work, and will now add you to my favorite authors list. Please update soon, Ciao
Nysk 2006-03-24 ch 9,	abuseGreat story! Wish there were more chapters!
goku90504 2005-07-12 ch 9,	abuseHey you need to update this one
Alex Ultra 2004-06-28 ch 9,	abuseWhat can I say? This whole dang thing was simply awesome. You pulled off the fight realistically, managed to make me feel the excitement that I so often just barely miss when I read bad writing, and still managed to make a few funnies in the spaces. I was a bit annoyed that they didn't just cleanse the stupid shadows. I mean, I can understand if they had to weaken them first, but it was like they never even bothered to think about it! My first thought would be 'How do we get them to stop acting like this?', not 'I'm gonna get my butt kicked today and possibly let the world get destroyed!' I mean, these shadows are just too hit-or-miss, cut and dry. It seems like every possible ally, and a few of the heroes themselves, are all being taken over by the bad-guys. T.T And just like always, Ranma has to do practically all the work himself... God, his life must really suck... Well, at least he isn't bored! (Bored enough to spend hours searching for good stories based on fictional characters... X.X) I hope you get the chance to update this thing soon. And I agree. With all three of her crystals, even Ranma, who doesn't quite have the power to destroy a planet, wouldn't be able to win against those tricks of hers all alone. The flight he could do with a little bit of doing, but the phasing and teleporting are practically cheating it seems like. Even Ranma would need backup against that kind of an assault. LATER ;P
Alex Ultra 2004-06-28 ch 7,	abuseMost Nabiki's already get on my nerves, but this one takes the cake. She was absolutely evil and she justified it in the name of her family. A little conning I can understand, but trying to disrupt the very way the world works? All for a little revenge for some honor that didn't really seem to exist in the first place... Sigh... LATER
Alex Ultra 2004-06-28 ch 6,	abuseYo. This was a pretty good chapter, but there were some things I didn't really like. I was practically livid when all the girls at the school started yelling "PERVERT" and beating on everyone. I SO wanted Ranma to snap and say "EVERYBODY KNOCK IT OFF NOW!" And then when the whole school seemed to focus in on him, I just wanted to scream and pull all my hair out (and that's a lot of hair...). That whole thing with the dad and the demon head had me annoyed too. I wouldn't figure Ranma to be intimidated by something like that, let alone a firearm. I guess it's okay, he can act scared if he wants, but it's just something I have to sigh at when I see it. "MAMORU IS HER BOYFRIEND!!" After what he did to her? They still believed that!? XD They musta been more screwed up than anyone knew... I'll be back... LATER
Gummadoon Fanatic 2004-02-19 ch 9,	abuseGreat fanfic, and interesting fighting scenes. I liked how this fic flows. Plz update soon!
dogbertcarroll 2004-02-06 ch 9,	abuseGreat chapter. Loved the Omake.
Kura-kun 2004-02-05 ch 9,	abuseThat was a pretty nice chapter albeit short in a way, the way some scenes were dragged on seemed to make it...short yet long at the same time...you know what I mean? I still liked it though...too bad there wasn't a drunk Ranma ;) Later
DJ 2004-02-04 ch 9, anon.	abuseNice balance of action and humor. In the earlier chapters it mentioned that the Sailors had knight counterparts and the Queen mentioned soulmates, is that connected to why the Sailors are acting so emotional around Ranma, even when they are not under that negative energy influences or the Love Beam?

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