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Wildfire2 2008-04-24 ch 3,	abuseI like this story. I was bummed that you havn't updated in two months. I hope you'll update soon I'd like to see what happens. Later Wildfire
Tatsumaki-sama 2008-03-16 ch 3,	abuseOh dear. Not to a very good start are they? I liked how it was Donnie and Ralph who are fighting instead of Ralph and Leo. And with the two of them being stranded in the middle of nowhere with only each other, things are bound to get interesting. I can't wait to read the next update.
Eridani23 2008-03-08 ch 3,	abuseO, I like the plot in this story. It's different than anything I've read. Donnie vs. Raph...Great idea. Can't wait for the update!
caylender 2008-02-27 ch 3,	abuseUm, well, good thing Don brought some supplies. Seeing how they can hardly agree upon a single thing, I suppose that this will be indeed, a long trip. Great chapter, post more soon!
Tink17 2008-02-26 ch 3,	abuseYay! I love new chapies! I was dying with anticipation after the last chapter, wondering where the guys were going to be left. Can't wait for more!
Rose of Hope 2008-02-26 ch 3,	abuseLOL! this is great! can't wait!
Jackamiah Meaney 2008-02-25 ch 3,	abuseHey again! I'm looking forward to more. Unfortunately, I'm leaning more towards the side of exhausted, so I'm having problems forming the coherent sentences about my opinions on this chapter. It boils down to the following: I like it. The writing is fun and I liked the interactions between the boys. I can't wait for more. And that shall be the end of this completely useless review. curtseys.
Turtle Wax 2008-02-25 ch 3, anon.	abuseWow, this story is cool. I can't wait for chapter 4! ;)
54Viruses 2008-02-25 ch 3,	abuseThis is going to be a lo-o-ong trip. Please post soon! This is a great story!
VGiselleH 2008-02-25 ch 3,	abuseI'm really liking this story, the Raph and Don bit from the movie didn't really get resolved at the end after all. And now they're stuck with each other...I can't help but laugh :p Only thing I can say is that it's too bad we won't get to see Mikey and Leo (if that is even the case, I have no idea what you're planning!) because I really enjoyed their convo in the first chapter ^_^
Hack.Drawer 2008-02-25 ch 3,	abuseAh, so now things are growing more interesting than before! Where did splinter drop them off? Will they work together? Will they recognize each other's strengths and weaknesses and pull together for the sake of one thing?! HAH! ...Er...anyway...nice chappie. I'm always so excited whenever this particular story is updated. ^_^ I want to see how they work together, and if they can change their attitudes and views! W00tt!
eclipse 2008-02-21 ch 2, anon.	abusehey, I have read your NT stories, thought that I would give this one a go. It's pretty good, hope you update soon, and I am still patiently waiting for an update on A Perfect Christmas... please don't leave me hanging!
Tink17 2008-02-10 ch 1,	abuseGreat story! I look forward to seeing how you develope it!
TreeStar 2008-02-09 ch 2,	abusehaha! so Splinter knocked them out and is going to drop them in the middle of nowhere someplace where they don't know how to get home and HAVE to stick together? Probably someplace dangerous where they need to protect each other and lots of fear and suspense is awaiting them? I'm excited even if I'm wrong! I can't wait to see what happens next with them. Will they have their phones on them? Because that seems like it would be redundant and counter-productive to forcing them to take care of each other under extreme circumstances. This has so much potential and again the characterization is wonderful. I really like Raphie's "little brother" note at the end there. Pulling rank on little Donnie, huh? If he saw his 'little brother' get into serious trouble, though, Raph would probably automatically respond to that inner call telling him that with family rank comes big brother responsibilities. I'm very eager to read more!
TreeStar 2008-02-09 ch 1,	abusewoah! Nice! I loved the fight and the two post-movie characteristics of the two brothers, especially Donnie. He's a know it all, but he's still one of the two family babies, and Raph bests him at fighting and at protecting others, as well as hunting probably, so I think that sending them into the wilderness or even out into the city together right now is a great idea, because they would fall back into their places. Raph should be protecting Donnie like a good big brother, and Donnie needs to remember that his brother is there to take care of him, and that's vice-versa, too. Seeing Raph as a neanderthal is new for Donnie, and I find it interesting for their relationship (for a starter point in fixing it, i mean) and Raphie's wanting to beat Don... really BEAT Don is also way out there. (Plus those two make the greatest couple ever...Ahem) So there's SO much you can do with this. And your writing is sublime. The pacing is quick but not rushed, the detail isn't skimped out on or overdone, and the characterizations of all of them, I must say again, are very interesting and real. I could SEE the scene unfolding, and that's really something! :)

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