|Reviews for The Forsaken|
| WhisperingMoons 5/3/09 . chapter 1
Well this is very interesting indeed and nicely written. I want to know how Inuyasha ended up being inside Kagome.
| PinkCatsy 4/26/08 . chapter 4
It's me, PC and I am filled with questions and i can't w8 until u answer them. I, myself, am suffering from the same review challenges as you.*sighs* It truly is sad when you write with your heart and get nearly squat in return.
| Masu 4/8/08 . chapter 1
Well First off, I can defiantly tell that you wrote it. The story's main character seems to have your idk "voice" so to speak.
little things here and there. You put your personality into the kagome character. The story its self is edgy and dark at times. Although most of the story takes place inside her own head. Although the end leaves me going "huh?" being unfamiliar to the series and all.
| Tohru 2/9/08 . chapter 4
Woot! I really liked it! I did D Whehn is the next chapter coming up? The more information, the better! XD
| NikaShae 2/7/08 . chapter 4
| LockeChan 2/4/08 . chapter 3
Hey Daddy's Pixie! Sorry it's taken me so long to review this chapter... And I'm also sorry that I'm the one reviewing... You probably looked at your computer and thought, "YAY! I got another review! Somebody else read it!" and did a dance. And then you saw this, and now you are sad. But it's okay, keep it up! People will recognize your prodigious writing talents eventually, and they'll worship you, and you'll rule the world from your weird island. But yeah, good chapter! Look forward to Beta reading the next one.
| ionwolf 2/2/08 . chapter 3
Well Skai, I mmust say that you out-did yourself on this chapter. It's the best one of your stories that I have read so far. So I say keep up the good work!
| Mr. Little Fish 1/30/08 . chapter 3
Hm. Odd. I thought it was intresting. Though, honestly, it might be just me again, but how did she get "hacked up"? I thought she just pierced her heart? Other than that it was good. I'm still wondering what caused her to try and kill herself though. I mean, besides a demon possesing her, what has it done to drive her to suicide? Also, how did it come to possess her in the first place? I'm sure you'll explain in later stories, but I just thought that was odd.
| Mr. Little Fish 1/23/08 . chapter 2
Oh, the plot thickens. So now we have a voice in her head that imitates or is actually Inuyasha. That and the Houjo punching... Well, I have to admit, It was nice. The policemen eating donuts is pretty stereotypical, seems a bit added on as a lame joke, but I have to admit I got a tiny laugh out of it. Also, the whole bitch of a reporter seems a nice touch. Keep at it, can't wait for the next chapter.
Needs more teen suicides.
| Alex 1/23/08 . chapter 3
Pretty good. Cannot wait to read more. Cookies for you!
| Mr. Little Fish 1/19/08 . chapter 1
Doesn't really tie in with the inuyasha series, but I suppose no fan fic really does. It was good. Short and unless I didn't pay enough attention...I'm not really sure why she's doing what she did. I may need to read through it again. And by the way, are the four elementals you mention from ToS? Oh well. You were right about it being morbid though. Teenage suicide. I like it. Needs to be more of it. Also, was that voice Inuyasha? Or just a spirit? Not sure. Oh well, overall it was good. Also, the part with Kagome dies brings a smile to my face.
| KamKamChanChase Lane 1/18/08 . chapter 1
Ok pixie; i do like the rather descrpitve undine gnome thing; you do an excellent job of keeping in susupense; im rather suprised when it turned out to be kagome; such an emotional confusing end;
i hope in later chapters if she doesnt die you elaborate on her methods;
other wise its pretty good
nice job _
well..its not bad..
just a little emo...dont u think my pixie?
| LockeChan 1/13/08 . chapter 1
Hey, you come up with the most messed up ideas, you know that, sis? Lookin' forward to all the future updates! _
| ionwolf 1/13/08 . chapter 1
Well, sis, I have to say that is was an interesting beginning, and because of that I have to be honest with you, even though i don't like these kinds of stories...I want to know what happens! So keep up the good work and keep posting!
| inubabe4e 1/12/08 . chapter 1
that was great! good job pixie