I enjoy the updates from this one. You build an exciting case, and I enjoy all the original characters. Can't wait for more.

Just discovered this! Nice work. Please continue.

:O You killed someone else, but :D for the super-cute Lissa/Don interactions, she's such a loveable OC. Keep posting soon!

And the plot thickens...what's the connection...can't wait for more!

Just to let you know I'm really enjoying this. It's an intriguing case, and I like all your OCs, as well as how you're potraying the regular characters. Looking forward to more.

Oops. Good job, Danny. Hope Lissa and Don aren't on the rocks for long...patiently waiting for more!

I loved the hangout party with Adam, Danny, Don and the crew. Cheese-less pizza, though...I dunno...
And what's up with that last paragraph?! Nightmare?

Seems like you've done your research, sounds like you've either been in or been to a few Broadway shows. I'm definitely interested, can't wait for more!

Hi!
Love your story, I love Flack, and I like Lissa. Your writing is pretty good! I noticed Pizza Express in your story. So, your British, huh? Yeh, me too. However, I'm now living in America. Michigan to be exact. I loved pizza express when I was living there! Best Cannaloni ever! we had one of those in Carlisle! Oh, how I miss the little things! Anyway, sorry to get off topic! great story, update soon!

i love this so far please update soon

WEll you know I already love this and Lissa is just a hundred shades of cute but Don/Lissa is a pairing I could almost see in the show =P though he'd get a jolly good messer berating if he did! POST MORE SOON!