 RarusuRinnu1310 2009-09-10 . chapter 5Aww! I loved all of the chapters, but i was sad to realize I was at the last chapter you had updated!
Now I'll have to wait for the next one ^^
I it was great! I can't wait for the next chappy :D |
 Elsil 2009-03-18 . chapter 5This is an exceptionally well written story. I really enjoy your characterization of the Bleach cast- you infuse them with far more life and realism than many other writers out there, and don't make the problems or actions that they are involved in trite and nonsensical. I hope to that you update again soon! |
 Xxbleach_rulesxX 2009-02-06 . chapter 5 great chapter!
love the hitsuXmatsu fluff!
also love the love triangle!
keep up the great work!
hope you update soon!
X just a bleach fan |
 OverLordRevan 2008-12-24 . chapter 5lol this is a great story can't wait for the update. |
 paypi 2008-12-19 . chapter 5 it gets exciting every chapter.. haha.. nice job! the love triangle makes it more exciting! |
 FrozenChaos 2008-12-10 . chapter 5I am really enjoying this story, it is well written and the plot is developing nicely - although the love triangle is killing me! So much angst, and poor timing!! However I love the interactions between Hitsugaya and Matsumoto (especially the fluff ones) they flow very naturally.
Anyway great job, I look forward to reading the next chapter :). |
 LitaDelacour 2008-12-09 . chapter 5great so far. i can't wait for more. man. this is all very confusing feelings wise. i hope nothing happens to Hitsugaya..though if he does get hurt, matsumoto micgt make up her mind about her feelins for Renji and Hitsugay, you can't have them both. does matsumoto know just how much hitsugaya loves her and what is going through his head? does she know that he can't stop thinking about her? those were some of my mental questions.
Amara |
 MatsuMama 2008-12-07 . chapter 5Oh, what a delicious chapter! Tons of fluff, you ramped up the sexual tension and the love triangle wonderfully...poor Renji! :D And poor Hanatarou! Toushirou just scares the crap out of him, huh? ;)
And poor Toshirou for that matter; too little too late? Or IS it!? ;)
Well done - it's SO good to see you writing again! Of course, you could have been writing other non-Bleach fics and I wouldn't know, but it's wonderful to see you dipping your toes back in the HitsuMatsu pool. I love this fic - can't wait for the next update! XD |
 Rachel Noelle 2008-12-04 . chapter 4I have enjoyed reading this, and I certainly hope you will find time to continue it.
I commend you for spell-checking and good grammar!
-Rachel Noelle |
 Siriusly Amused 2008-03-22 . chapter 2A surprised look overcame her features before mischief entered her eyes. She leaned over slightly and placed her arms behind her back causing her breast to push out. He honestly didn’t know how those things stayed within their confines. It was also quite distracting to have the threatening objects so close seeming almost ready to attack him. No, he hadn’t forgotten the last time he had met with them. They had, after all, nearly given him a concussion.
That has got to be the best paragraph in the history of the English language. Closely followed by this one:
Then the moment was ruined with those words and slim arms wrapping around his head, pulling him into a warm, dark valley that threatened to suffocate him with lack of air. |
 darkangel1910 2008-03-04 . chapter 4I hope he talks to her. Talking always clears the air and makes things better. |
 kunaithower3000 2008-02-28 . chapter 4great story!! plz update soon! |
 Havenoname 2008-02-27 . chapter 4Even with the best outcome Toshiro could get with Rangiku, I still think there will be some pretty rocky parts in their relationship now (as if it doesn't have plenty already). |
 icedragon38 2008-02-27 . chapter 4Yay! I really love this couple! Update please!^^ |
 MatsuMama 2008-02-27 . chapter 4Well, you know i love this chapter! Am I wrong in assuming that your drabble Agony is kind of a counter-part to this? Or was it posted separately for a reason, and Matsu and Renji aren't actually 'together' for the purposes of this story? Not that I mind, I'm just wondering. And I love watching Hitsugaya trying to figure out all his grown-up emotional turnmoil... *sighs adoringly, but still wants to hit him upside the head*
(Also, you left one or two parenthesis in, just so ya know!) ;)
LOVED it, can't wait to see what happens next!! *hurglz* |