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RarusuRinnu1310
2009-09-10 . chapter 5
Aww! I loved all of the chapters, but i was sad to realize I was at the last chapter you had updated!
Now I'll have to wait for the next one ^^
I it was great! I can't wait for the next chappy :D
Elsil
2009-03-18 . chapter 5
This is an exceptionally well written story. I really enjoy your characterization of the Bleach cast- you infuse them with far more life and realism than many other writers out there, and don't make the problems or actions that they are involved in trite and nonsensical. I hope to that you update again soon!
Xxbleach_rulesxX
2009-02-06 . chapter 5
great chapter!
love the hitsuXmatsu fluff!

also love the love triangle!
keep up the great work!

hope you update soon!

X just a bleach fan
OverLordRevan
2008-12-24 . chapter 5
lol this is a great story can't wait for the update.
paypi
2008-12-19 . chapter 5
it gets exciting every chapter.. haha.. nice job! the love triangle makes it more exciting!
FrozenChaos
2008-12-10 . chapter 5
I am really enjoying this story, it is well written and the plot is developing nicely - although the love triangle is killing me! So much angst, and poor timing!! However I love the interactions between Hitsugaya and Matsumoto (especially the fluff ones) they flow very naturally.
Anyway great job, I look forward to reading the next chapter :).
LitaDelacour
2008-12-09 . chapter 5
great so far. i can't wait for more. man. this is all very confusing feelings wise. i hope nothing happens to Hitsugaya..though if he does get hurt, matsumoto micgt make up her mind about her feelins for Renji and Hitsugay, you can't have them both. does matsumoto know just how much hitsugaya loves her and what is going through his head? does she know that he can't stop thinking about her? those were some of my mental questions.

Amara
MatsuMama
2008-12-07 . chapter 5
Oh, what a delicious chapter! Tons of fluff, you ramped up the sexual tension and the love triangle wonderfully...poor Renji! :D And poor Hanatarou! Toushirou just scares the crap out of him, huh? ;)

And poor Toshirou for that matter; too little too late? Or IS it!? ;)

Well done - it's SO good to see you writing again! Of course, you could have been writing other non-Bleach fics and I wouldn't know, but it's wonderful to see you dipping your toes back in the HitsuMatsu pool. I love this fic - can't wait for the next update! XD
Rachel Noelle
2008-12-04 . chapter 4
I have enjoyed reading this, and I certainly hope you will find time to continue it.

I commend you for spell-checking and good grammar!

-Rachel Noelle
Siriusly Amused
2008-03-22 . chapter 2
A surprised look overcame her features before mischief entered her eyes. She leaned over slightly and placed her arms behind her back causing her breast to push out. He honestly didn’t know how those things stayed within their confines. It was also quite distracting to have the threatening objects so close seeming almost ready to attack him. No, he hadn’t forgotten the last time he had met with them. They had, after all, nearly given him a concussion.

That has got to be the best paragraph in the history of the English language. Closely followed by this one:

Then the moment was ruined with those words and slim arms wrapping around his head, pulling him into a warm, dark valley that threatened to suffocate him with lack of air.
darkangel1910
2008-03-04 . chapter 4
I hope he talks to her. Talking always clears the air and makes things better.
kunaithower3000
2008-02-28 . chapter 4
great story!! plz update soon!
Havenoname
2008-02-27 . chapter 4
Even with the best outcome Toshiro could get with Rangiku, I still think there will be some pretty rocky parts in their relationship now (as if it doesn't have plenty already).
icedragon38
2008-02-27 . chapter 4
Yay! I really love this couple! Update please!^^
MatsuMama
2008-02-27 . chapter 4
Well, you know i love this chapter! Am I wrong in assuming that your drabble Agony is kind of a counter-part to this? Or was it posted separately for a reason, and Matsu and Renji aren't actually 'together' for the purposes of this story? Not that I mind, I'm just wondering. And I love watching Hitsugaya trying to figure out all his grown-up emotional turnmoil... *sighs adoringly, but still wants to hit him upside the head*

(Also, you left one or two parenthesis in, just so ya know!) ;)

LOVED it, can't wait to see what happens next!! *hurglz*
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