My dear. I remember the original when it was up. And I am so glad you have decided to re-write it.

I do love how you have made sure the characters have become more rounded and yet still keep their original personalities. I wish Blanche well and I hope this is updated when you can. I shall keep an alert on this very amazing story.

I like the story, although I think the romance is a bit too rushed and focused on... I think going back to Raphael's original plan of revenge would give the story a bottom, and make the whole falling-in-love part a bit more tragic, because I don't think that's been handled too well here (mostly because it's been rushed so).

Plz update the story! It's very good! Very great! :D

You can find soulcaliburprincess in Fanfiction or deviantart or her website where of course she claims that it belongs to her http:/soulcaliburprincess./index.htm in the section fanfictions I've written. Because she DID Rob it from you.

Someone names SoulCaliburPrincess in deviantart claims this story My Dearest that looks a lot similar to yours. Did you let her claim it, if not she stole it.

OMG! beautiful! please update! I really love this story plz update!

I read the original version of this story and I think that this version gives a deeper understanding of every character's personality. Great job! I can't wait for another update!

Sayonara for now!

I have to say that I think your writing has greatly improved since the last time you wrote this story. I love how you vividly describe a scene from Raphael's point of view. It seems to not only give us a vivid description of the scene itself but helps the reader also get a glimpse of his character. Good job!

Can't say anything different, except that it was slightly choppy to me, but I've read(and written) much, MUCH worse. You've got some great potential for writing, and you should probably make your own story to get published, I'm serious.

I knew there was something different about this chapter. I remembered that it was the third chapter that Raphael went to Blanche's balcony. But yeah, it was still good. I just hope that you can get pass the part where you ended it last time. But I'm sure you will.

Anywho, Keep-R-Up.

-Myth

PS: do you like my new phrase? Or should I just go back to "Keep it up"?

UPDATE

This sounds like it oughta be a really good one. I haven't read the original, so I don't know what it's all going to be like; I wonder how Amy will react, and if Raphael finds/fights other SC chars. Perhaps Amy's Uncle Siegfried would have a visit...

Ah, don't worry, it's all just silly ideas. It's your story, and you've already planned it out, so don't worry 'bout my ramblings, I don't wanna jack up what you were aiming for. It seems like it'll be great when it's finished, so keep it up!

I never read the frist one, so i cant tell you if this fic is better, but it is very good. i do hope that you don't stop updating on your other fics though

I love the update and the changes that you have made to the fiction. I also like Raphael's last name. Well, his alias' last name.

I hope that you do not change or delete this fictions any time soon.

Hey, I get the first review. You were right. This version is new, improved, and has a change of Blanche's hair color. I'm glad you re-posted it. Can't wait for chapter two.

-Myth