Very simple and sweet. Loved it. :)

This is beautiful. Thank you for writing it.

Awe, poor Tseng :-/

but thats the way it is Tsengy poo ;D Cloud got in the way LOL

anyway, short but sweet, indeed.

Even in your short drabbles-they are amazing.

Though I don't really mind TsengAerith ;]

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-TGN

Very beautiful.

Ah, that was like... a prose poem? is that what they call it?

So pretty, with a calm, flowing pace, and neutral somehow. I like the feel of this one. And, Tsengith! Whoo! The world needs more of those, as well as more "experimental", "poor excuse for a one-shot"s like this. :D

Great work!

Cute, cute, very cute :) Your stories are warm and tickle me, SecretBox.

One thing, though, I think perhaps elaborating more on Tseng and his feelings for Aerith might have given the story more depth. I realize it's a drabble, but I was begging for more on Tseng. I like romantic thoughts, I WANT MOAR OF THEM

I really like your words, though, they make me feel. And feel.

Rah rah rah, go SecretBox :)

- WAS

It's short - and it's beautifully straight to the point.

You have just thrusted the stake into Tseng's heart without all those dragging angsty stuff.

I congratulate you.

(Lolz, am trying to give a straight-to-the-point review for the effect XP)

I really like drabbles, especially when the characters are reflecting on themselves.

The only thing I didn't like was the last sentence...Other than it was really good.

Seeya and God Bless,

SunsetDreams

Oh my goodness. That was lovely. Good job! _ -is so proud- I thought that was sweet and sad. Poor Tseng..although I got mad when he slapped her on the helicopter..

Good touch of emotional insight there and nice imagery with the 'no Prince Charming'.

Yay Tserith!

Ah, such a bitter, tragic pairing, I'm so happy you chose to write them! :) My only complaint is that this was so short :) (It worked for what it was...I just would love to see you write another, longer one...XD)

That was sad. Lovely-brilliant, I should say as usual. Your writing inspires me. Aha. You should write more. This is interesting to say the least. I'll admit, I've never read a piece of Tseng/Aerith before. So; I can't really judge but I liked this (well, I like all your work), but yeah. lol. I heart you. You're amazing. (is this review long-enough yet?) Write more, yeah? :D

x;

I loved the visualization for Aerith! Absolutely adored it. I just thought the ending was a bit weak. ._.