That was really good! I loved that he couldn't thinking about Amber but he could thinking about Tracy...YAY! Ha, I loved it; great job! :)

Angelica

Your characterization of Link was perfect. I enjoyed the mental list he was making with Amber. Favorite part was that in the end Link's pleasure came from actual memories of Tracy rather than fabricated ones.

"He felt the twist in his stomach; the increase in heart beat..."
I think this perfectly illustrates Link's growing feeling for Tracy.

M... I had a feeling it would be this when you said you had a higher rated chapter. But I liked it. I like this whole series, in fact. My second favorite to the two Link/Tracy smuts you currently have written, lol.

You write very well. I love your attention to detail. It's just right; not too much, nor too little. And your character development is spot on. Not only do you do an excellent job in capturing Link's character and pushing it to grow throughout your story, but you also manage to maintain the personalities of the other characters, as well. I love it.

Anyway, keep up the great work. I can't wait to see more.

Also, I hear you have a Livejournal. Could you drop me a link, perhaps? I'd like to check it out if it's all right with you.

Ah, there's the sexual tension I was looking to see you experiment with for Link!

Well done. I think you paced it all quite well, especially at the end. It's so easy to just give in and have the character switch to the person you want them to think about-you decided to show that change of heart, so to speak, that has to happen during a fantasy. That was extremely insightful. Good spot.

I was disappointed to find that you didn't explore the car parts bit with each move that Amber made. You did it once, and I was ready for a comparison cycle (Do you know what I mean? I hope so.), but it didn't come. Just a "could have been" that I wanted to bring up for you.

Still, though, I enjoyed this one. You kept everything neat and tidy, just like it should be. Good job!

Keep writing!

...ah, yes - with the tire's needing to be rotated...