Reviews for It's been so long

Reviews For: It's been so long

Mrs. Donald Flack Jr. 2008-08-22 ch 9,	abuseI'm getting bored just waiting for the next chapter. I'm actually watching all the seasons on my comp when I wait for the next chapter. Please please please continue.
Mrs. Donald Flack Jr. 2008-07-24 ch 7,	abuseOh no! Flack's next! Please no! What happens next? A fire to her apartment? Please continue!!
sparkyCSI 2008-06-30 ch 7,	abuseWow. It's been a while! I'm glad that they are moving out so the relationship can move forward without it be too awkward. And you're welcome for the beta! Eager to see what you have in store. :D
xdannyx 2008-02-19 ch 4,	abusethat was so good cant wait to read more!
sparkyCSI 2008-02-04 ch 3,	abuseI'm still trying to wrap my head around the fact that both Danny and Flack have read Pride and Prejudice! Not a book I see either of them reading. :D You're welcome!
xdannyx 2008-02-04 ch 3,	abusehey loved your story cant wait 2 read more!
kayee.143 2008-02-01 ch 2,	abusethis is a really good story!! i love it keep up the great job :) update soon please and thankyou.
sparkyCSI 2008-01-25 ch 2,	abuseOkay. So I'm actually going to review! I really like how this chapter turned out. I love the sarcasm going on between them...Flack has a not of snarkiness and she's a match for him there. I'm really enjoying the story. :D
redbess 2008-01-25 ch 2, anon.	abuseI love a good Flack story! Can't wait for more!!
Aphina 2008-01-25 ch 1,	abuseHey I like the idea of two people on either side of the fence trying to date, it gives you a lot to play with. You make her quite firey and quite passive at the asame time, which is interestng. I'd like to see ow this continues.
kaitlyn143 2008-01-13 ch 1,	abusei love it so far. update soon
Phantom Flamer 2008-01-12 ch 1,	abuseOk. So, I'll be completely honest here. I love the idea. It 's a great concept. I can even believe the fact that after filing 20 complaints, the guy is still on the street. Hey things happen. But there are somethings that just don't make sense. One, as we've seen on the show, Flack doesn't have an office. In the heirarchy of the police, the only ones would be someone like a lieutenant. And Lily almost a Mary Sue. She goes from being calm and collected to completely breaking down. Sobbing on the strong man's shoulders! How cliche. I'd expect an attorney to have a little more moxy in her. Why would Flack, a homicide detective, being taking charge of a stalking case? And even if he did, he took her to his apartment? Why? It's not like they are best friends...heck, he didn't even recognize her!! Anyway...Great idea, but full of way to many cliches and plot holes.

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