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Reviews For: Sweet Music

Raidersrule76 2008-07-02 ch 1,	abuseUnless you're Jordan Sparks in disguise, then this is the most uncreative thing I've ever read. At least 80 percent of this is someone else's work, and what's not someone else's work is so generic that you'd be better served pretending you plagiarized from someone else, just to save yourself the embarrassment of being associated with it. Bottom line, lame, due to minimal effort and utter fail where said effort is shown. Try again plz.
Magnumus 2008-01-13 ch 1,	abuseCould of done with a bit more dialog. More explaining of the situation maybe.
donjonkeeper 2008-01-13 ch 1,	abuseThe story got good base, but it's kind of short to break up with someone and make out right away with someone else. This story might have been better if it was a twoshot.
jliljj 2008-01-12 ch 1,	abusei thought it was good but she broke it a deep just (it sounded like this to me) i just lost interest in you so bugger off i love aang and well... not u haha
1gokataang 2008-01-12 ch 1,	abuseOMG I LOVE THIS SONG JORDEN SPARKS ROX! I never thought about about the possobility of any thing like this! Its awesome!
Aangsfan 2008-01-12 ch 1,	abuseIt was WAY too fast, it was like, 2 seconds passed by and they were immediatly making out. I love kataang and all, don't get me wrong, but, u need to make it longer.
Jewely2951 2008-01-12 ch 1,	abuseOh man I dont wan't to say this. But...It was really really bad. IM SORRY! I know thats mean but it was. The writing was a very childish type and there was NO charecter development. The exsplainations for everything were simplified. i.e. Cause he doesnt treat me right. It seems you were trying to write Katara in a sweet manor but it just came out as someone who had had a full frontal lobadamy. i.e." I lost intrest in you." (Harshly worded for a "nice" charecter) and the making out right infront of Zuko along with the dialoge was just plain terrible. And the completely weird i Love yous was very cheasy.The "I will sing to you" part was just crazy. Also the end was just plain odd. He stormed off and was never an issue again. I gotta be honest this seemed more like Terribly writen Kataang fluff with a side of Zutara bashing covered up as a vistimised Katara/zuko relationshipe. (Where in Zuko is the bad guy.)Plus the ENTIRE THING was like a paragraph in length. (Im not counting the song since you didnt write it.) IM SO SORRY, if you find this too harsh but i was just trying to be honest and when I went to your profile to check your age (To make sure I wasnt about to hurt the feelings of someone younger then you) I saw how old u were and thought you should know so you could improve it. Im REALLY REALLY SORRY. I just wanted to be honest. PLZ dont be mad at me. Pretty plz?

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