Geez, Dei...why do you curse so much...? xD

Very awesome! As you know, I loved the part with Itachi. And...well, any of the interaction between Sasori and Deidara.

Now, I order you to read copious amounts of SasoDei and write chapter two! x'D

I love this. Such a great opening, especially when contrasted with the first chapter. The imagery is amazing too, especially the final part: it leaves you with this haunting image that carries into the rest of the work. Very incredible.

Great opening, love. Made of win. I love your Deidara.