 Shakespeare Freakazoid 2009-11-17 . chapter 13Like, seriously now. It's been almost a year. Are you just going to leave us with the decoy chapter, or what? xD
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 xXthenextbookwormXx 2009-05-05 . chapter 12Awright, I'm goin' to the Volturi. (See my reviw for the last chapter.) |
 xXthenextbookwormXx 2009-05-05 . chapter 11*gasps, horrified* You bugger! If they don't make up, then I will send the Volturi after you, saying that you spilled the vampire's secret to the world! |
 xXthenextbookwormXx 2009-05-05 . chapter 7It was very short, is how it was. I swear, there was more authors note than actual story. |
 I Am Switzerland101 2009-03-20 . chapter 12im not going to flame this or anything, just want to see an update really soon. This story has potential and i would love to see how you continue it. Critisism? well other than the fact that the way you began the story it was like jumping into the middle of a book, not a whole lot of beginning and getting to know the character's or any specifics, but like i said it has real potential.
I'm actually feeling emotionaly sadden because Quil kissed her best friend, accident or not, and that she kissed him back fevoriciously, well wow what an awesome friend she might be.
In this chapter (even though it's a deco) it felt increadibly rushed, but it wasnt the real thing so whatever. Lol.
I really want to see how you continue this, so update again soon please.
-NM |
 mediate89 2009-01-14 . chapter 1Why would Claire's last name be Uley? She's Emily's niece, not Sam's... |
 evermorefire 2008-12-12 . chapter 13Really? O.o It was a decoy? -scratches head-
Err...I totally knew that. XP
But it's already been 'soon'! D=
Where's the chappy?! Grawrl! And yes, I'm aware that 'grawrl' isn't a real word but TOO BAD! I wanna new chapter! >. |
 ShakespeareFreakazoid 2008-12-08 . chapter 13 Yes, I'm too lazy to sign into my account right now. :P
Anywho, HOW DARE YOU? How could you trick us, your loyal fans? *Sics my mutilated blender on you*
XD, JK
Actually, I'm a bit relieved that it was just a decoy. That much drama at once does NOT make for good fanfiction.
Post the real chapter soon!!
~~Aimee~~ |
 Awakened Soul 2008-12-08 . chapter 13why must you be so cruel lolzz...let's forgo the claire teenage angst and get to some quil/ claire togetherness |
 Anonymous 2008-12-07 . chapter 12 Bwaha. I shall remain anonymous. And if you try to find out who I am, you will certainly die.
Jkjk, but seriously, don't try.
Ok, first for the bad part of the review, so I can get that out and over with. I hate to say this but, this chapter was rather...disappointing after reading the other chapters which were all really well written. There was just a certain quality about those other chapters, a certain way of writing that made me want to continue reading. But with this chapter, I got a little bit bored with it. On the bright side though, i enjoyed the twist in the plot, and clearly it's going to be a thrilling story...if only u would just do a teensy bit of rewording for Chapter 12.
One thing I really enjoyed about this chapter though, was "Mr. Takenotas". Haha, I almost literally laughed out loud.
And in case you were wondering, I do have a fictionpress acount, but not a fanfiction account, which is why my review probably hasn't been "verified" or whatnot.
Ok, anyways, I would say more, but I've got stuff to do. So good luck with your next chapter! Until then, cyas! |
 evermorefire 2008-12-06 . chapter 12CUPCAKES! -lunge-
XP Yay! You updated! =D -glomp-
And thanks for the mention at the top of the chapter. ^^
I really think the Claire character you created is really interesting. She's exactly like a normal girl with a wide range of sarcastic comments at her disposal. =D
And I also noticed the mention of Tokio Hotel. xD
But OUCH, I mean, did you have to have her split her head open? XPXP
Poor Claire. ^^
Hope she doesn't go into shock because of blood loss. >.<
Great chapter!
Thanks for updating! =D
-DK |
 XVampWitchCatX 2008-12-05 . chapter 12I'm reviewing, please don't attack me! Love the chapter. |
 Shakespeare Freakazoid 2008-12-05 . chapter 12*Gives you Why-didn't-you-post-this-chapter-earlier look anyway* Seriously, I'm always like "Hm, I wonder when Love Forever is going to be updated."
Besides that, you have now made Quil kiss someone else, and practically rip a piece of Claire's scalp off. Drama much?
XD, I'm just kidding. I really do like this story, but it's getting a bit overly-Dramatic for me. You might want to tone it down. Just a suggestion, though.
Update soon! |
 Precious Purple Pixie Dust 2008-12-04 . chapter 12YAYAYAYYAY THREE DAYS GRACE! clary so much kewler now XD
i like this chapter...it b funny...
dont eat me for sayin this but..andrea kinda reminds me of dan p. cause of the whole skater hair and skinny jeans and yea :P
keep writin
btw i tryed 2 rite sumtin better than usual so dont accuss me of writin a "tiny pile of crap" =] |
 starlit skyes 2008-12-04 . chapter 12Hey! I'm gonna cut the why-didn't-you-update-for-so-long stuff–I figure you already know that. ;p Anyway, this was a great chapter.
"Two girls were having some sort of telepathic conversation – they were both concentrating so hard that it appeared that they were constipated."
"I turned around to face forward so that my breakfast wouldn’t stain her white sweater an ugly shade of brown."
LOL. Very cool! ^_^
Um..a lil doubt. Claire is fine with Delia? I would have thought spending time with her would have been painful for her–you know, cuz Quil kissed her and stuff? Or is that all cleared up?
By the way, I LIKE the name of the teacher! ;P
Way to go! |
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