Wow. I think this one is better than the last couple ones have been (and they were still good, but they seemed to lack a bit of the confusing, magical quality of your first few). I agree; it's not quite scientific enough to really sound like Ed. I think it sounds more like Al than anybody else, but whatever. I enjoyed this, especially the seemingly-contradictory lines like "where fire is ice is water" and "and tears stream from my empty eyes/that appear completely dry."
Great going! ^_^

Poor Edo...

wow. it's short, but it's impactful. awesome job.

aw... so sad and sweet!

That is so pretty...

Poor Ed, he's all alone in this one...he sounds so sad! T.T

really powerful poetry :) i love it.

Isn't Al talking about his feelings for Ed? They're brothers. They literally live for only each other. If the other was gone, the other would resolve to finding the missing one and bring him back.

Nifty!

this was nice. the language and imagery were very well done, as usual.:D

I always love reading these poems; they're so unique. I'm glad you're back ^_^ I find phantom pain very intriguing, and it's especially so because of Ed's peculiar situation.
Ooh, you're going to enter a contest? Be sure to tell us what the outcome is! Well, you know my favorite one is the first one, "Electricity." Looking back over them again, I've decided that I also really like "Running High." I think you'd be sure to win any contest with either of those poems! Good luck! ^_^

this one could be entered. I like it very much. also I like the word pseudesthesia.

Interesting.

I like the slight change in style (or substance, I can't decide which) for Al. And the third stanza, the longest one, seems to be to be talking about "Such pretty words/ syllables leaping together," almost as if it's talking about itself, because those words are beautiful too.
Anyway, I liked this one. Good job!

I like it. It was very fitting, and Al is just so much fun to write/read. you write very beautifully.