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| Yemi Hikari 2008-08-23 ch 1,  | abuseIs this uhh... a fic making fun of Mary Sue's? I think it is... but one can never tell... |
| shana elmsford 2008-05-20 ch 8, | abuselove it. |
| Bophenbean 2008-05-02 ch 7, | abuseYou actually do a pretty decent job at making Muffy look good, and how all the girls will react like a bunch of emos at every little thing she does. That's not how I'd think it would happen with the actual characters (since, ya know, Muffy's their friend and all), but this is fanfiction. |
| shana elmsford 2008-05-01 ch 7, | abuseloved it! as always kid ps. is arthur in chapter 8? ^_^ |
| Bophenbean 2008-04-10 ch 6, | abuseOkay, maybe Blue had a legitimate reason to be all pissy at Muffy in the previous chapters, but I can't figure out why she is in this one. It's not like Muffy raided Blue's wardrobe and stole all of her floozie-clothes or something. ...or DID she?! |
| shana elmsford 2008-04-10 ch 6, | abusethat was Gold! ps. can m fight sapphire in chapter 7?" please! ^_^ |
| shana elmsford 2008-03-07 ch 5, | abuseloved it! ps. chapter 6 please? ^_^ |
| shana elmsford 2008-03-05 ch 4, | abuseso cute! ps. chapter 5 please? ^_^ |
| Dead Composer 2008-01-17 ch 3, | abuseWhoops. Why is Chapter 3 identical to Chapter 2? |
| NocturneD 2008-01-15 ch 2, | abusethe girls could take her special hanky and have Binky wipe his nose on it, or butt on it... >_> something mean, but please have Muffy end up getting bashed to the extreme in the next chapter. like her getting trampled by a bunch of students... or getting locked in the boys bathroom where it stinks so bad. >_> Sorry, that's how I roll |
| Bophenbean 2008-01-14 ch 2, | abuseHey, one can never be too mean to Muffy. She does deserve it. ...but she still rules all the same. :) |
| LottesBlossom 2008-01-14 ch 2, | abuseMan I feel Mean to Muffy ,but She is Snobby so, I'm right on track So Keep those reviws coming! & I'll soon put antother chapter |
| Bophenbean 2008-01-13 ch 1, | abuseAll right. Mary Alice vs. Mary Sue! |
| NocturneD 2008-01-12 ch 1, | abuseI think this story is starting pretty average so far, but the concept sounds pretty good. I usually don't root for OC's but, GO SAPHIRE! |